Daavd - Leaving me out in the cold (kritik tack) im not a dragon but smoke is comming out of my mouthi'm cold like your heart as i'm standing outside your houseevery breath im taking is like a knife coming down in my lounghow could our relationship ever become this wronglike a cruel joke that lastest way to longso i ask you again, how could it ever become this wrong-- like a near death experiens, seriouspictures flashing infront of my eyes, periodevery little piece of paper that have words to youis now burning to keep me warmevery little piece of paper that have words to youis now burning, cuz every word i've written about you was wrongbut im still standing here, in love, stupiedi should've broke the arrows for cupiedbut insted i'm standing here, in love, stupiedcuz i wanna belive in cupiednu när man varit borta ett tag och börjat igen skulle man uppskatta kritik, gärna konstruktiv!börjat spela in hela låten men blev speciellt nöjd med den här versen och vill veta om jag läser i blindo eller om de är något att hathx på förhand/D