Liri - Bad boy ( Första i Engelska )

Liri - Bad boy ( Första i Engelska )

Tjuu nu släpper jag 16 bars för första gången på engelska.
så ge mig mycket kritik nu så jag vet vad som ska förbättras :) Thanks!

Liri tha man yep hes back again
you can shoot me with bullets but i feel no pain
you can feel my flow cuz ure a fucked up hoe
when i drop this shit starts a big rap show

im tha king cuz im from tha east.
you know my name Liri the big beast
this is no bullshit just listen at my lines.
dont got any time i fuck you with my rhymes

Girls on the club they shake theirs asses.
shake the asses and put gin in the glasses
come on dont turn the music down to low.
cuz then you dont know when this shit gone blow

I know ill never gone serv any money.
But as everybody know no money no honey
you got shit in your pants please dont start fucking cry
shit everywhere im leaving this godbye