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life's deepest stage

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2009-03-03 16:51

life's deepest stage

har skrivit lite på engelska, det är dock skrivet i talspråk... droppa gärna en kommentar och lämna åsikter
Peyz


Vers 1

can someone tell me what the fuck is going on//
where did u go i just held u in my arms//
sometimes i think of the tuff life i had//
i know how it feels like running 'round being sad//
this aint the first time and i'm getting a counsches//
all the stenght i used just to play this honest//
every mother fucker i just left behind//
like an icecold killer but now it's time//
to tell them i'm sorry show them my regreats//
it aint easy to live when it feels like a test//
and i dont wanna fight in this war no more//
too many times at the frontline alone//
several bombs blowin' of my mind//
why cant i just press rewind//
my only wish is to live like the normals//
i dont wanna be choked by the fucking orders//

Vers 2

when the sun is raisin', it aint for me//
i'm not the person that i want to be//
too many drinks and way too many smokes//
i'm in a falling ship n cant se no boats//
i dont no how many bullets i can take//
but nothing can destroy me when my eyes is lika a lake//
this aint fake//
tears is rolling down my cheak//
i'm far from every goal i wanna reach//
questuing my self but there is no answear//
the love is too deep fo me to handle//
all i want is someones support//
searching a turning point to be my alert//
hard to be happy when u'r left in the dark//
be knowing of everyone that is blowing sparks//
why couldnt i just be born in heaven//

Vers 3

lookin' at my weed for the one last time//
thinkin' of it, yes i really need some//
everything is better when i'm high as a bird//
so many times i said that i love her, but she never heard//
i got a fucked up filosofi//
i've stoped brating but dont wanna go to emergency//
fuck that i dont need no hospital//
i got the death diagnose of smoke-critical//
i'm not religios, i've never made a pray//
but i dream of the lord come n get mey//
i get alot of years left i cant die right now//
but my soul is breakin' down fast dont know why//
their's nothing to repair me, can't feel no love//
constant wishin for the life above//
so i'm leavin' the disition fo my destiny//
i'm goin' to sleep cuz my head is to heavy//

Plan B, har'u någon porr?

2009-03-03 22:36
lite comments haha
Plan B, har'u någon porr?

2009-03-03 22:44
i'm getting a counsches


well... förutom vissa kassa rim (och vissa som ej rimmade alls), felstavningar, överplayade "punchlines", och lite tunt innehåll, så fattas lite kompetens (se citat) för att skriva på språket... men fortsätt så lär du bli bättre - det var helt okej.

falling ship


- vet dock inte hur skepp faller......
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2009-03-05 09:52
jo haha, som sagt har jag inte satsat på att stava rätt, men tack för kritik:)
Plan B, har'u någon porr?