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Fatal Death Awaits - Gawt

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2009-02-11 17:49

Fatal Death Awaits - Gawt

The world is coming to its end and it's time to know
Whether it's an age or you just decide to let off and grow
young and scared of decisions, been staying on the low
But my ideology is like a trilogy, you gotta see the whole
All I got is a distorted eye and a destructive behaviour
Paranoia, stress, and damn, my schizophrenia's my saviour
Capital of Armenia, Yerevan, only dude to care and so
In my left hand, a flower, right holds the C-Four
Fuck it, I'm ambidext, real flower power and a couple of
Depressive shit to hug, therefore empowered anti society love
All this behind the skin of a deeply plagued mind
A shy soul whom only wish to think normal and fine, but
The revolutionary cannot be denied within the foreign design
World awaiting - A lifetime treated worse than a crime
Before I thought I thrived, but realise I only cheated
But now I know better, i'm three stairways ahead minds
That includes everyones, your, the worlds and mines
why not take the short cut to the same fucking line?
My IQ's perfectly fine, before, stressed me all the time
Now im ahead of my time, but still not ready to die..


Konstruktiv kritik, tack.

hold your hands in the ayer!

2009-02-11 18:46
Bedrövliga rim. Om man ska göra en "cool" revolutionerande hiphoptext så kan man väl åtminstone tänka på rimmen?
Blunted in stockholm

2009-02-11 18:49
Mm, du har nog rätt men det är inte riktigt mening att det skall vara en "cool" revolutionerande hiphop text även om det kan se så ut. Jag är dessutom relativt ny inom skrivande, framförallt engelska, så snälla, ha lite överseende.
hold your hands in the ayer!

2009-02-11 19:34
yeaa - det var det jaag hade (överseende alltså). så det är bra mayn - fortsätt.
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2009-02-11 20:26
tack eighty!
hold your hands in the ayer!

2009-02-13 16:18
uppar denna, positiv som negativ kritik uppskattas, klaga gärna på rimmen
hold your hands in the ayer!