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Nybörjare ya know?

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2008-12-15 22:59

Nybörjare ya know?

sho, jag har funderat på att börja rappa som alla andra tuffingar här. jag har några texter som dammar som jag gärna skulle vilja ha kritik på!


every damn day - is a new rainy day
it only feels like i am chained to hate
i can't even look at my reflected mind
i tryin to give people a rejected smile

everyday is shitty - but a new life
---here ya go, go on and suck the cruel life
this is only a godless creepy world
it doesnt do anything except bother peoples souls

im tryin to not make the same mistake again
thats why i am trying to claim this way im sayn'
im ready to bury the truth and lie
im steady to hurry up and doin' this twice

we're all living in a godless land
people who's lying it's a cold hell, man!
bury the truth - a lie, behind this monster
damn, this is the lie i offer

well - i got no thoughts about being famous
i am strugglin hard but i cant see any pay-offs
in this mad world i cant see any pattern
i will not kill my sensitivity but that did just happen

but life goes on - so i put my problems to the left
but they will keep stalking me so i will do my best
and i will keep trying to shake them off me
im sitting here and rhyming i just made the poetry

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och sen nånting jag typ hade påbörjat.

people come together by hating the same people
people hate together and laying the same equal
we're all living in a friendship of lies and control
hate is a straight line and i bend it to my ego soul

some people - they just dont understand
they cant see the facts in these onehundered lands
some people - just dont do anything to stop this
you can talk - just go ahead and pop it

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close your eyes baby - you're lying down in the dust
shadows falling - a part of me were us
i'm holdin' your heart in my hand and i'm thinking
a better end for us was a thing i couldn't bring in
you should see the moonlight, shining down on me
all i can say is that i'm pretty damn sorry
we were meant to be togheter for the rest of our lives
but it all ended up with a damn kitchen knife
what i mean - we were really meant to be together, forever
the best thing you could do, were runing away, however
- someway you fucked everything up
sorry for blaming you - but it was your fault, so fuck

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REFF:
now, i can't look at your face......
i'm going to love you til' the world falls apart
there's nothing left besides my own broken heart
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shadows rising - can't fall asleep at night
i can't get no peace - or any delight
but i will do everything to get over you, i will try
you shouldn't made me angry, so it would end like this way
but i had no choice, i'm standing for it, it was no mistake
i can her your whispers in the wind, asking me if i am happy
i'm thinking 'bout the memories and it makes me laughing
you thought every big mess -
could be solved with kisses
you little whore, you were only my mistress
but - you're getting bury tonight -
can't look at your face, it's so messy after our fight

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REFF:
now, i can't look at your face......
i'm going to love you til' the world falls apart
there's nothing left besides my own broken heart
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