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The head of the military government! Lång text!

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2008-12-14 00:31

The head of the military government! Lång text!

Shue!! Har jobbat på texten pausfritt i ca 5 timmar! Var tvungen att skriva av mig, och bestämde sen att skriva en hel låt. Min engelska är inte världsbäst men det funkar. Lite grammatik fel kanske. Är värt att läsa hela. Om någon duktig vill kicka så kanske det kan ordnas. Kickar inte själv. Skulle vara kul om nån hade lust. Konstruktiv kritik gillas!
Hade allihopa!! (Y)

Beat: Meny spåret på Kill Bill vol. 2 DVD'n (Urami Bushi)


Vers. 1

Can't take it anymore, you was the one and only//
But then you lied to me, now I can't feel more lonely //
I can still feel the touch or rub constantly//
You lied about so much, and betrayed me wasn't you//

And I wont stay beside you, cuz you're taking me to the ground//
You only treat me like shit, when my thoughts goes around//
I want to know the backside, the feelings behind//
It was a joke you should applied, now i've hit the punch line//

You haven't done anything for me, it's unbelieveble//
all you've done for me is making me feel miserable//
But I'll think about you tomorrow just like before//
I'll stay by the window, to the poor sound of hardcore//

You raise me up, hate to hear it on the radio//
Want to lay down on the subway, cry out in the shadow
I love you, I hate you, I miss you, I want you//
I'll be valiant, You can apologize to next to my winning statue//


Reff. x2
You're like the head of the military government//
a component or constituent element of a system//
So I have to live alone, wasn't worth the pain to keep on tryin'//
I'll live my life, with the gnawing frustration of the feelings I'm hidin'//


Vers. 2

I don't want to be like a fucking lonely prisoner//
If God can give my life back, i'll maybe stop crying til' christmas//
I'll move on, you know, life goes on but it's harder//
My life is fucked, my empty soul is back in kindergarten//

Please, can't live without thinking about my angel//
The angel is you, you were so damn fucking faithful//
But what changed, can't belive the situation//
To the devil in hell, from the angel in heaven//

When I look at the pictures of you in my memory//
Then things don't get brighter, just black like a cemetery//
You blame me, so God kill me slowly//
I blame you, I'm wrong, that's what you've been told me//

Sorry baby, our last chance was the one that you damaged//
Don't know if you want me, or if it's feelings that you arranged//
You crushed my heart, not once, but twice//
We fitted like glue, but it wasn't good so (suprize)//

Reff. x2
You're like the head of the military government//
a component or constituent element of a system//
So I have to live alone, wasn't worth the pain to keep on tryin'//
I'll live my life, with the gnawing frustration of the feelings I'm hidin'//


Vers. 3

Can't explain' my heartache, it's like the man in the mirror//
Staring at me, with a broken heart in a below the freezing point winter//
Need to be strong, don't want to break down and cry//
can't make it without you, but that was our last true goodbye//

I'm out of catchword and inspiration for this sound//
But i'll keep on writing cuz i know I got it deep in my mind//
The microphone is everything, It's been for a while//
Going famous and stuff, This is my lifestyle//

Back on track, Love, why did you complicate//
We were both winners, but then just, checkmate//
Don't understand the problem, but our love is lost//
You know that you want me, but you don't know to what cost//

Insert inconspicuously or quickly or quietly//
Let me pass out of your memory//
Take care honey, or take him back desperately//
You gave me so much, thank you, you WERE heavenly//

Reff. x4
You're like the head of the military government//
a component or constituent element of a system//
So I have to live alone, wasn't worth the pain to keep on tryin'//
I'll live my life, with the gnawing frustration of the feelings I'm hidin'//


You said that you was feeling bad but that's not frustration//
You havn't felt it, so you said it for attention//
But you know what, that's stupid, only my oppinion//

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2008-12-14 00:38
Ser att jag råkat skriva ''You was'' istället för ''You were'' på många ställen. Shit, billigt av mig. Men ni förstår.. Sliten och lite dragen så man kan inte alltid vara på topp!
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2008-12-14 00:42
Och när det gäller att jag inte kickar och
The microphone is everything, It's been for a while//
Going famous and stuff, This is my lifestyle//

Så har jag slutat kickat!
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2008-12-16 22:58
Feeeeeeeeeeett!!!!!! Big up (Y)

2008-12-16 22:59
Kom igen Whoa!
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2008-12-16 23:30
orkade inte läsa hela, men det var bra. men du skulle kunna arbeta på ett lite intressantare rimschema, då det bara var de sista orden som rimma... (iaf på första och andra versen vad jag såg) Men den va bra keep working
Fuck mainstream and there commersial sound, bigg it up for the underground

2008-12-16 23:32
Första raderna är billigt shit.. Helt fuckat.. Bättre ner mot mitten.. Borde gjort det mer intressant från början.. Men thx .. Peace!!
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2008-12-17 20:32
bra gjort!
kan nog inte ge så mkt kritik för har bråttomt iväg!
men soft !
Lilla fia pling plong.

2008-12-19 13:36
Thankss!! Meer??
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2009-01-14 17:29
Upp!
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