Ooops! I killed it again..

UPPIN THIS! Ya´ll know what it is.

"Yer shit don´t fly,
ya´ll some LAME DUCKS!!"
old and bad.



Inget för mig.

Bless

Ghost. You´re talkin out yer ass again..


Why are you taking some lines out of context, without the set up for them.
And then you call "it old and bad" ???

UH-UH!

YOUR shit is is "old and bad". I´m Fresher than DEODORANT!

You can´t judge a bar, or bars, without considering the set up.

Peep:

"This be tha closing chapter,
A curtain call fo´ ya lame phuxx!
I heard em all, ya´ll are wack!
Yer shit don´t fly,
ya´ll some LAME DUCKS!!"

And if you don´t get the wordplay and metaphors here, well, then you´re just slow and feeble..

Old and bad? I think NOT.


And I also had plenty of other hot shit in the verse,
why you ain´t quote any of these?

"Tha rap game sucked,
so I skull-phucced the bitch!
Now tha game is my hoe,
I done hit her like a switch!"

another ill quotable:

"An´ headz posin like they can digg it,
when they NEVER dugg it!
Carhartt´s got my heart,
-I´m RUFF N´ RUGGED!
N´ ain´t nuthin gold ABOUT you, chicken nugget!
You went from rags, to dirty tarp,
So get LOW! Like ya BUDGET!!"

I bet you don´t even get these bars either, couse if you did, you´d be on my tip, beggin me for pointers and mc-lessons! Ha-ha!

I tell you WHY you ain´t quote any of these. Becouse if you did, you would HAVE to admit that this shit is HOT.

And ANYONE could see for their damn self, that this shit is hotter than ANYTHING that you ever dropped on here, (or anywhere else..).


Actual and on point criticism, and sincere feedback is welcome.

But check that li´l played out hate-shit at the door!
Aight dunny?

Gown.

ok you are the one and only!

So I cant say whats on my mind? I think those lines are wack thats it.

But did I say that the rest was shit? NO....
Just that most of the rhymes u wright has been written... ( sorry for my spelling)
NOT EVERY ONE but still I´ve seen and heard alot.

Not a hater just tellin it like it is.

BlESs

Whatever dun..

Just don´t take shit outta context, and then try to say it´s wack.

It´s NOT wack. You just didn´t include the set up for the bars.

Everythings´s wack if you remove the set up for it.

It´s the set up that makes up the whole context, and you can´t REMOVE the set up,
and THEN, say that you don´t like it.

That´s like removin the chorus and the hooks and the beat from a song and then say:
I don´t like it, it´s wack- that shit makes no sense.

It only shows how little you know about lyricism and rhyming.

UPPIN. NON HATER FEED ONLY.