Spajk - Writing Rhymes Bout Bad Times

Spajk - Writing Rhymes Bout Bad Times

Tjah!
har lite brist på insperation just nu,, så försökte mig på en text på engelska
och körde på samma tema som Afro, Chill och Dizzy i deras tråd fakesters änd töntsters(tror jag den hette)....
vill gärna få kritik på hur jag kan förbättra den här och sådant :)


Wanna pop fake thugs like microwave-popcorn
but i ant a gangsta,, so please just go home
Im just a guy whom like to write rhymes
just wanna look back at these times
and be able to say; that was the highlights -
Of my life,, that everything was right'n lovely
but it seems like my sight is fading slowly....

So im'a get glasses'n a fukking gun
so i can remember the times i was popping some
Im penetrating you with speakers playing my song
blowing you up like a airballon,,, so just fly away like looptroop
Fuck old school fuck new school,, this is my school
Im like; -Hi how do you do today fake thug?
-so your'e a gangsta? oh? you do drugs?
-i guess you have a nice car and crib with alot of bitches?
-oh,, you really have all that?,, really,, one of the richest?
-im sorry i guessed wrong about you,,,
-you're right hiphop is alot like you...


Going the wrong direction....