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seban - black market.. [trafficking]

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2008-02-17 13:36

seban - black market.. [trafficking]

I skolan har vi nu ett projektarbete om trafficking, jag skrev en text om hur det kan se ut!
Inte skrivit engelska så länge så ge gärna råd!

Elena is only seven years old but already a prostitute
spending her whole day on the street, and calls her skirt a suit

she is only seven years old

and fucking Swedish men on vacation, like forty years old

 

she was raped by her uncle and sold by her father,

he needed money but it's no excuse to sell your daughter

now she walks alone, searching for a place to sleep tonight

death is near without payment, so she's afraid of fights

 

she meets this man, goes to his room and smile just to keep him satisfied

knowing the rules, even though she deep inside- wanna cry

the pain is getting stronger and the man's love is fading now

not many seconds before the man starts screaming "out"

 

no home to go to, and the temperature is way below zero

she knows the next man may be a so called hero

but he never turns up, the girl is freezing to death

her screams leave an eco but they have no effect...

 

 

On the black market it's dead or alive

it's like a circle, to the end of the time

it's all faking, there's never a real smile

think about it, and stand up and fight (x2)

 

 

Zhao-Li is only twelve years old, but already dyin from HIV

It's a killin disease; he got from an American creep

he was taken from china, to what they said was a better life

but not for him, after 2 weeks his brother had to be sacrificed

 

he never saw him again, so he started praying for help

he made some mistakes, one: that he took all of the blame

but he's just a kid, an innocent victim of trafficking

like 1,5 million other kids, yeah it sucks but fact is real

 

Zhao-Li had to visit this man; he got raped, then got a panic attack

His heart stopped beating and never woke up the morning after that

a 911 call was never made, the man was afraid

he really needed some help

 

he wanted to get rid of the body, he didn't want to get caught

time in prison would be his death, he be like a bug in a jar

he succeeded, but he sleeps with an open eye,

it's sad but Zhao-Li;s body were never found


On the black market it's dead or alive

it's like a circle, to the end of the time

it's all faking, there's never a real smile

think about it, and stand up and fight (x2)


Lämna en kommentar! Pz!

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2008-02-17 20:59
komigen
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2008-02-17 21:14
Den är fet =) Duktigt skrivet kort sagt.
 

2008-02-17 21:24
säger det samma =) du e bra på engelska

2008-02-17 21:57
Tycker de ser skitbra ut! Keep it up!
Livets vägar kan föra dig vart som helst...

2008-02-17 23:21
skit bra! du la den grymt!
It's better to give unasked, then giving asked.

2008-02-18 02:39
shu man, det var tung text du kan ju engelska bra, bara man försöker vilket du har gjort- men du får fortsätta med ditt skrivandet du utvecklats mer o mer. fortsätt så. den var bra text peace man
spottar ut mina rader som feta ballader, låter pennan och bläcket på pappret glöda, vilken möda jag ska bepröva, din rapp är så slapp som kuken din, vilken ful min du har ingen
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2008-02-18 09:32
seban min elsklings pojke. riktigt kul att se dig skriva på engelska. :)
men har inte sett dig i audio på ett dag. fortsätt att prodda med marvino!
ni lad det fett man!
ruskigt bra text btw. peajz!
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2008-02-18 14:03
shu,grym text!,peajz!
 

2008-02-19 08:37
tack så mycket alla! =)
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2008-02-20 06:55
komigen
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2008-02-21 09:45
come on!
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2008-02-22 00:22
Inte för att ge dålig kritik elr nått Kompis :P...

Men kan du ha fått lite inspiration från "Ludacris ft Mary J blige -Getaway love"?

Aja, ser lite likadant elr iaf samma tema.. men aja . den va bra! Upp!
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2008-02-22 00:45
Gillar den! Fint!
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2008-02-22 22:31
thx! =)
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2008-02-24 19:49
Mycket bra! Jag hade ett projektarbete om just det här ämnet, och jag tycker du samlar ihop det viktiga!:)

2008-02-25 14:02
tack!
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2008-02-26 07:26
 mer
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2008-05-12 16:09
oj hade glömt bort denna, tack alla!
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2008-05-12 16:14
Lite grammatik fel här och var men helt ok överlag!