matztAh - Directions

matztAh - Directions

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I don't know witch way i should go,
though i just hear people say, follow the flow.
That way is on the wrong direction to my new life,
to long from my house,car and my beutiful wife.
Like the fish in the water i follow the stream,
and just follow the thoughts i have, in my dream.
I can't think right, go stright or sleep tight,
i've just think my life is a big fight.
To go loss from everthing,
just like a sheap ring.
Maybe my life is to be this way,
to been ignored by everyone, to never stay.
Can't release this toughts of my head,
i want leave my warm bed.


Ref.
I just want to live a good life,
with my friends and my wife.
So please let me do that,
i svear, i will be silent like a rat.



So, please let me be free as you,
you know, i'm a human too.
You can't decide what i should do,
becuse, im not like you.
We live in a free world, with our own rules to follow,
you and i can not decide what to do, just lay in our sorrows
You are a good human, so plase let me get my truck,
i don't gonna hurt anybody, becouse im stuck.
In this world we have one man who makes the rules,
who to kill, or who punish, and that's good, i don't like fools.
So please my friend, and brother, let me run away to my own thoughts,
and i will not come back here, i will stay in your hearts.


Ref.
I just want to live a good life,
with my friends and my wife.
So please let me do that,
i svear, i will be silent like a rat.