Illusion - Love is about lies (andra engelska)

Illusion - Love is about lies (andra engelska)

Min andra text på engelska. Har bara reff+vers+reff än så länge. Började på den för någon timme sen :P Käkat popcrorn och kokat ihop nåt!

Kommentera gärna med utförlig kritik, och är det fel ngnstans beror det förmodligen på  att jag är trött ^^.


Ref:

I'm dreamin' of a life, where the stars shine bright
I would like to think with my brain, not my heart one time
Leaving all tears behind, never ever getting hurt again
Leaving all tears behind, never ever getting hurt again

Vers:
I told you that I loved you so much
Love is like the ultimate drug
I will never fall in love again, that's my thought now
But that's what I've been thinking, all times
After a relationship, hearts have been broken
Keep trying to find the right one, but she is nowhere
Now I'm leavin' love behind, I will put an end to the feelings
Been kissed by the love of my life, but I'm still sleeping
Although it is great to be in love, you can't say
That you won't ever leave the person, then say u can't stay
Cause it's all lies, the thing that's going on
Now Iv'e been hurt to many times, I can't keep holding on

Reff:

I'm dreamin' of a life, where the stars shine bright
I would like to think with my brain, not my heart one time
Leaving all tears behind, never ever getting hurt again
Leaving all tears behind, never ever getting hurt again