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2007-05-16 17:41

Total Agony

Alla har vi mått mer eller mindre bra i våra dagar. Här hade jag en liten tänkarstund över livet, och kladdade ihop en dikt med inspiration från filmen "Love Actually".

Positiv, negativ och konstruktiv kritik önskas.

 

-I thougt it was something worse!

-Worse then the total agony of beeing in love?


A simple rip-off from Love actually

But it catches the simple fact of reality

Don't try to understand, don't try to explain

It's either pleasure or burning pain


You play the ball and wait for the refery's call

Will you still stand or are you gonna fall?

Who's in control of your life?, It's not you

Just keep asking theese questions, that's all we can ever do


Will I die soon, or live to see my children die?

Is this for real, or is life one big fucking lie?

Whether you like it or not, the gods are in command

They hold your very destiny in one hand


I know the gods don't hold me very dear

I finish this poem with a sad little tear...
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Peace!