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Spex - Love pt. V

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2006-07-17 16:56

Spex - Love pt. V

Clouds change, loud rain never sounds the same
The sound of pain's always been around to stay
Sometimes, it seems to fly away, sound astray
Like it's flown miles away but, shie.. it's only 'round the way
Pen is still burnt, sessions turned, lessons learnt
Never feel nothing, now that one could really measure earth
Test results back like less been worth major more

Another lonesome season home in sweden
Grown up's leaving lonely children without a common reason
Whatever pro's are pleading, it's long from eden
When summer's bringing smokepuffs breathing
Torn up, bored out Jesus, a story told in hebrew
Nore the feeble or the rebus belong in fiction, love's the victim
He's just another old and greedy lochness creature
Unseen like homeless people, his Jocelyne's bleeding
She joined the roleplay, admitting it's a bold game
Scrubbed the leftover soulmate off her cold plate
and left her old mate, "So long, Jay!"
She was never really his, feelings dissed
And accidentally he fell into her croc pit...


Walk me away from
You are takin' it wrong now
I just wanna dance!

Sweet movement, sooth beat
Smoothly moving our two feet
Girl, shake your booty

Damn, honey's cunning
Funny, a heart at fine beat
Oh, one thing; Love me!

norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2006-07-17 17:21
Riktigt grym!!
Fett nice läsning här alltså... Feta rim nice schema
soft innehåll... dock är den ända besvikelsen

"Walk me away from
You are takin' it wrong now
I just wanna dance!

Sweet movement, sooth beat
Smoothly moving our two feet
Girl, shake your booty

Damn, honey's cunning
Funny, a heart at fine beat
Oh, one thing; Love me!"


Tyckte den drog ner allt efter en annars riktigt bra text...

peace
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2006-07-17 18:01
very nice, allt förutom det där i slutet som sticker ut..tycker du kunde ha stannat efter "croc pit", men det är ju bara min åsikt, men som sagt...snyggt skrivet!
Always look on the bright side of life

2006-07-18 19:23
Scrubbed the leftover soulmate off her cold plate
- fastnade för det.

annars e det nice som vanligt, sköna ordval och en del snygga uttryck.
Lyricist

2006-07-18 20:31
shit...snyggt skrivet! Du rimmar helt sjukt skönt i denna och det flyter som det ska. I like it...yeah