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Tell me, låt text..kritik snälla du!

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2005-12-20 20:04

Tell me, låt text..kritik snälla du!

Text till en låt som spelas in ganska snart (förhoppningsvis) skulle vilja ha era synpunkter på bra skit eller missar o dissar.

HIT ME!


:Intro:

Wise syrian words


:Hook:

tell me tell me why you're crying
stranger tell me why you're hiding
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why

tell me tell me what you're feeling
stranger tell me how can i help you
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why


:Verse 1: (Pancho)

here's my story about life and death
with my final breath i get it off my chest
got nothing left and my thoughts are a mess
soon i'll be blessed with eternal rest

life's a bitch, im nude on the sidewalk
in a few minutes ill be outlined in whitechalk
and people standing around feeling sad about me
couple days ago all they did was doubt me

been living on the street for years all alone
it's like living in a house but it's not your home
it's like working at a job but you don't get paid
it's like having a girlfriend but you won't get laid

tell me why, do they always kick and shove
you always get fucked but you never feel loved
now throw those middlefingers at the state
we can all relate and share the hate


:Hook:

tell me tell me why you're crying
stranger tell me why you're hiding
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why

tell me tell me what you're feeling
stranger tell me how can i help you
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why


:Verse 2: (Pancho)

answer me this and riddle me that
eyes wide open but they still see black
you're not contempt with all that you have
i would die happy with less than half

everyone starts life with a clean slate
some people have more food on their plate
some people live on the street everyday
some people see us and just walk away

yes, im a bum and i live on the street
my roof is the sky and my floor the concrete
life is a lesson we all have to take
sometimes it's hard and sometimes it's great

never give up on the friends you make
they always on your side whatever side you take
here's where my story will finally end
death and i will soon be friends


:Hook: (Jöni)

tell me tell me why you're crying
stranger tell me why you're hiding
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why

tell me tell me what you're feeling
stranger tell me how can i help you
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why


:Bridge:

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:Hook:

tell me tell me why you're crying
stranger tell me why you're hiding
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why

tell me tell me what you're feeling
stranger tell me how can i help you
tell me i need some answers
tell me just tell me why

The more you sweat in training, the less you bleed in combat!