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Blizz the Divine - The stream of life...

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2005-07-16 03:17

Blizz the Divine - The stream of life...



James A. Jensen - The stream of life (1935)


~Summer 1905~


She walked down to the water and washed her face
Squashed her ache, lost her faith from the cost of age
Why would she ever tell? She’s meant to be quiet
Empty inside, the river still feels alive for this riot
Mighty she thought, her face erased from this hell hole
A sold soul that might as well go to where they sell goals
Heavenly she said and plunged in the river with ease
I’ll play with God, Grandpa n Grandma living as I please
She drifted slowly down the stream as the moon watched
The man in the moon smiled towards her consumed lust
Whispered and said you’re welcome there’s room with us
A day later a red flower in the dessert bloomed in dust
Fumes of us remains revitalized, idols cry but why?
Mother, carry the children of abuse or at least please try
Release the skies, let go of the shell of this child
Mellow and nice, earth still holds the hell of this child



~Winter 1955~


The late winter came and he saved his breathe n wished
He had a quest to get kissed but was dismissed n ditched
He dished a glance on the ice n said man that looks nice
Once he read a book twice about a stream that took lives
A tear rolled down his cheek as he was holding his air
Filled with hate standing by the gates loaded with prayers
The stream engulfed his remains as the sun looked
Stunned, shook his family took the news by the brook
The police said it went fast and he felt roughly no pain
But they never knew the pain that buffered in his veins
That day a single dandelion climbed out the concrete
And that day the spring reminded of the spawned heat
In memory his family thought of the stream n planted a seed
A tree sprung out of the mud and demanded its needs
The water flows still and memories still last from the stream
Filled with dreams about change all memories remains



~Summer 2005~


He carved a heart in the tree right by the silent shore
The initials O and B. inside the heart of the pine’s core
It was love at first sight and he picked a rose out the dust
He blew the rust from the knife and said I know bout the crush
Does she love me or not? And he picked the last petal
It came to a not and he slowly twisted the metal…
Around his own wrist and quickly the water turned red
Close to the boarder to death the order burned n fled
Mercy my soul he said and ripped up his white shirt
He covered his arm with the fabric n said life might hurt
But if importance is nothing, Why should I fight first?
This is the last dance that I give away free, I’ll never flee
The stream smiled n said misery is hell n I’ve thought well
Life aren’t that bad it’s only mankind that brought hell
From that single second the sun smiled and just shone
The boy walked away and never tried to condone

"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."
---Albert Einstein

2005-07-16 19:24
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"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-16 19:27
Jag bara skrek, ooooohhhh vaa tung.. o tvinga min flickvän att läsa..

fet bra jobbat!
Fucks your life up crew
Tjabo!

2005-07-16 19:29
jag fick stånd när ja läste den... great work

2005-07-17 15:21
tack
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-17 15:25
sådär, inte bakis längre...

tycker texten var jävligt grym... fett flow o bra flyt genom hela texten... grym stycke indelning med... tycker detta inte behöver bättras mycket mera liksom.. förutom att bli audio istället ;)

2005-07-17 18:56
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"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-17 19:03
Sov inte på detta shittet!
Fucks your life up crew
Tjabo!

2005-07-18 00:20
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"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-18 12:45
Wizblizz does it again.
 

2005-07-18 13:11
Grymt bra!
"Jasså?Därför som White Lions fått så mycket skit av media?Sveriges farligaste klack,hell yeah" - Zow P16

2005-07-18 15:19
grymt bra, mäktigt bra.

Som sakt, sov inte på denna.
One puff, Two Puffs i know Teraq goin' nuts som vanligt
Med biggie och pac phat flowar med Bob Marley
Myspace: In memory of teraq

2005-07-19 17:36
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"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-20 15:16
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"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-21 14:23
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"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-21 19:47
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I was surrounded by powerful entitys of angelic emergence

2005-07-22 15:43
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"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-23 05:02
Från en annan sida på internet:

James A. Jensen - The stream of life (1935)


~Summer 1905~


She walked down to the water and washed her face
Squashed her ache, lost her faith from the cost of age


ey ! feet start blizz..du brifer virkeli med riminga hær ass..
ingenting å si på dete ass..godt innholdsmessig og fete rim,
flyter nice og er en jævla feet start..drit flott..

Why would she ever tell? She’s meant to be quiet
Empty inside, the river still feels alive for this riot


føler detta ass...særli andre linja..den var bra.

Mighty she thought, her face erased from this hell hole
A sold soul that might as well go to where they sell goals


et snev av dyphet..synes det var bra jeg..godt skrevet..
fett gjennomført

Heavenly she said and plunged in the river with ease
I’ll play with God, Grandpa n Grandma living as I please


å mayn..føler detta ass...er sånn jeg liker..fett

She drifted slowly down the stream as the moon watched
The man in the moon smiled towards her consumed lust


bra..holder deg bra til tema til nå..bra

Whispered and said you’re welcome there’s room with us
A day later a red flower in the dessert bloomed in dust


hvor henter du dette fra da !? liker dette..selv om jeg ikke skjønner
helt hva du mener overalt..men det er dypt og fett..

Fumes of us remains revitalized, idols cry but why?
Mother, carry the children of abuse or at least please try


holder det bra oppe..

Release the skies, let go of the shell of this child
Mellow and nice, earth still holds the hell of this child


fett det første hær..digg og underholdende å lese..digger rima dinne..du skriver intressangt og dypt..vannligvis liker jeg ikke slike tekster men jeg likte denne..likte spesiellt starten..nivåe synker litt mot slutten men det er så vannvittig lite..har kun med rima å gjøre..ikke tekstmessig

~Winter 1955~


The late winter came and he saved his breathe n wished
He had a quest to get kissed but was dismissed n ditched


aah..vellskrevet dette..

He dished a glance on the ice n said man that looks nice
Once he read a book twice about a stream that took lives


mmm..hadde vannskeli for å skjønne meningen til andre linja hær,
synes det virket litt for virkårlig..men..det er min mening..

A tear rolled down his cheek as he was holding his air
Filled with hate standing by the gates loaded with prayers


maan så bra skrevet ..dig ass..har ikke noe å si på dette ass..

The stream engulfed his remains as the sun looked
Stunned, shook his family took the news by the brook


hva kan jeg si..liker det !

The police said it went fast and he felt roughly no pain
But they never knew the pain that buffered in his veins


bra

That day a single dandelion climbed out the concrete
And that day the spring reminded of the spawned heat


fett

In memory his family thought of the stream n planted a seed
A tree sprung out of the mud and demanded its needs


du skriver vannvitti kult

The water flows still and memories still last from the stream
Filled with dreams about change all memories remains



maan..jeg er ikke mannen til å gi feed på slike tekster for alt virker bare perfekt og jeg kan ikke peke ut noen feil hær ass...du fortsetter og rime fett og tekst messi er du langt over dem fleste...vet ingen som kan skrive mye bedre..props


~Summer 2005~


He carved a heart in the tree right by the silent shore
The initials O and B. inside the heart of the pine’s core


er bra detta

It was love at first sight and he picked a rose out the dust
He blew the rust from the knife and said I know bout the crush


mhm..good

Does she love me or not? And he picked the last petal
It came to a not and he slowly twisted the metal…


hehe..fett

Around his own wrist and quickly the water turned red
Close to the boarder to death the order burned n fled


maan..inspirerer virkelig detta ass..

Mercy my soul he said and ripped up his white shirt
He covered his arm with the fabric n said life might hurt


mhm..tja..funker vell..men føler den er litt pressa ordlagt
andre linja hær ..men men

But if importance is nothing, Why should I fight first?
This is the last dance that I give away free, I’ll never flee
The stream smiled n said misery is hell n I’ve thought well
Life aren’t that bad it’s only mankind that brought hell


fett hvordan du setter opp rima hær da..kult skrevet.

From that single second the sun smiled and just shone
The boy walked away and never tried to condone


kul avsluttning..denne teksten var utrolig vellskrevet og sinnsykt bra gjennomført..følte kansje det ble litt mye roser trær spirer og slikt..men eller kan jeg ikke finne noe svakheter med teksten what so ever..alt er bra liksom..innholdsrikt fett..veldig underholdende lesestoff detta blizz..og btw...ble det ikke no av den topical battlen vi skulle få se ?

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Jågurt...varför ska jag bry mig egentligen...helt sant...snart kommer den sista texten jag postar på whoa om det inte blir ett Engelskt och ett Svenskt forum för lyrisism...

whoa e ganska totalt o-intressant jämfört med annat..
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-07-23 07:07
Jag är untouchable...ta bort min text och jag skickar mod's tillbaka till vanlig användarstatus...
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>