Från en annan sida på internet: James A. Jensen - The stream of life (1935) ~Summer 1905~ She walked down to the water and washed her face Squashed her ache, lost her faith from the cost of age ey ! feet start blizz..du brifer virkeli med riminga hær ass.. ingenting å si på dete ass..godt innholdsmessig og fete rim, flyter nice og er en jævla feet start..drit flott.. Why would she ever tell? She’s meant to be quiet Empty inside, the river still feels alive for this riot føler detta ass...særli andre linja..den var bra. Mighty she thought, her face erased from this hell hole A sold soul that might as well go to where they sell goals et snev av dyphet..synes det var bra jeg..godt skrevet.. fett gjennomført Heavenly she said and plunged in the river with ease I’ll play with God, Grandpa n Grandma living as I please å mayn..føler detta ass...er sånn jeg liker..fett She drifted slowly down the stream as the moon watched The man in the moon smiled towards her consumed lust bra..holder deg bra til tema til nå..bra Whispered and said you’re welcome there’s room with us A day later a red flower in the dessert bloomed in dust hvor henter du dette fra da !? liker dette..selv om jeg ikke skjønner helt hva du mener overalt..men det er dypt og fett.. Fumes of us remains revitalized, idols cry but why? Mother, carry the children of abuse or at least please try holder det bra oppe.. Release the skies, let go of the shell of this child Mellow and nice, earth still holds the hell of this child fett det første hær..digg og underholdende å lese..digger rima dinne..du skriver intressangt og dypt..vannligvis liker jeg ikke slike tekster men jeg likte denne..likte spesiellt starten..nivåe synker litt mot slutten men det er så vannvittig lite..har kun med rima å gjøre..ikke tekstmessig ~Winter 1955~ The late winter came and he saved his breathe n wished He had a quest to get kissed but was dismissed n ditched aah..vellskrevet dette.. He dished a glance on the ice n said man that looks nice Once he read a book twice about a stream that took lives mmm..hadde vannskeli for å skjønne meningen til andre linja hær, synes det virket litt for virkårlig..men..det er min mening.. A tear rolled down his cheek as he was holding his air Filled with hate standing by the gates loaded with prayers maan så bra skrevet ..dig ass..har ikke noe å si på dette ass.. The stream engulfed his remains as the sun looked Stunned, shook his family took the news by the brook hva kan jeg si..liker det ! The police said it went fast and he felt roughly no pain But they never knew the pain that buffered in his veins bra That day a single dandelion climbed out the concrete And that day the spring reminded of the spawned heat fett In memory his family thought of the stream n planted a seed A tree sprung out of the mud and demanded its needs du skriver vannvitti kult The water flows still and memories still last from the stream Filled with dreams about change all memories remains maan..jeg er ikke mannen til å gi feed på slike tekster for alt virker bare perfekt og jeg kan ikke peke ut noen feil hær ass...du fortsetter og rime fett og tekst messi er du langt over dem fleste...vet ingen som kan skrive mye bedre..props ~Summer 2005~ He carved a heart in the tree right by the silent shore The initials O and B. inside the heart of the pine’s core er bra detta It was love at first sight and he picked a rose out the dust He blew the rust from the knife and said I know bout the crush mhm..good Does she love me or not? And he picked the last petal It came to a not and he slowly twisted the metal… hehe..fett Around his own wrist and quickly the water turned red Close to the boarder to death the order burned n fled maan..inspirerer virkelig detta ass.. Mercy my soul he said and ripped up his white shirt He covered his arm with the fabric n said life might hurt mhm..tja..funker vell..men føler den er litt pressa ordlagt andre linja hær ..men men But if importance is nothing, Why should I fight first? This is the last dance that I give away free, I’ll never flee The stream smiled n said misery is hell n I’ve thought well Life aren’t that bad it’s only mankind that brought hell fett hvordan du setter opp rima hær da..kult skrevet. From that single second the sun smiled and just shone The boy walked away and never tried to condone kul avsluttning..denne teksten var utrolig vellskrevet og sinnsykt bra gjennomført..følte kansje det ble litt mye roser trær spirer og slikt..men eller kan jeg ikke finne noe svakheter med teksten what so ever..alt er bra liksom..innholdsrikt fett..veldig underholdende lesestoff detta blizz..og btw...ble det ikke no av den topical battlen vi skulle få se ? ---------------------------------------- --------------------------------- Jågurt...varför ska jag bry mig egentligen...helt sant...snart kommer den sista texten jag postar på whoa om det inte blir ett Engelskt och ett Svenskt forum för lyrisism... whoa e ganska totalt o-intressant jämfört med annat..
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>