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Komik- Rendez vous at the crossroads

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2005-06-22 17:05

Komik- Rendez vous at the crossroads

Started with chalk, painted my perspective of life on sidewalks
The streets were my canvases, my comfort, concrete bandages
Guided by citylights on pavements through dark october midsts
Decievin characters ignored the masterpiece & walked allover it
Own directions, sat back & observed a crackaddicts lone mornin
Drew pictures for each street, cuz every crack has its own story
I just followed & left the same footsteps as I wandered in circles
Deja vu, lost in the same way of life on wich I pondered in verbal
Chose path, perhaps the key to success or it'll lead me to death-
Still, I plee to forget & inhale breezes as fresh as a fetus's breath
Meet me halfway on a one way street, but no one is ever comin'
I am all alone at the stopsigns, & these streets reminds me of it
On every streetcorner, the unexpected usually intends to unfold
Receavin' all my ambition in visable form at the end of the road
Rendez vous at the crossroads, the question is; will I ever listen?
Storing my happyness down memorylane, but still I never visit...

I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-06-22 17:19
helt okej, lite under din nivå?

I just followed & left the same footsteps as I wandered in circles
Deja vu, lost in the same way of life on wich I pondered in verbal
Chose path, perhaps the key to success or it'll lead me to death-

- först går du i cirklar, men sen väljer du väg.. förstår hur du menar men du kunde formulerat dig på nått annat sätt.

Storing my happyness down memorylane, but still I never visit...
- omformulera, funkar inte så där!

bra annars förutom ett par små grammatiska missar
norman bates behemot
bubba fett alfred bello
arthur's detour azazello

2005-06-22 17:23
Spex: Tack. Mjo kunde nog ha omformulerat den där första raden du påpekade på först, orkade inte hitta en väg runt det hela bara;) Varför funkar inte den andra raden? Jag ser iaf inget fel i formuleringen, please enlighten me:)

I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!

2005-06-22 17:27
On every streetcorner, the unexpected usually intends to unfold
Receavin' all my ambition in visable form at the end of the road
Rendez vous at the crossroads, the question is; will I ever listen?
Storing my happyness down memorylane, but still I never visit...

-snyggt.

Skönt flow, jämna rader... Ja, detta var bra. Dock gillar jag dej bättre i svenska.
fuck all you haters!

2005-06-22 19:29
Grattis, du har blivit en Blizzakkopia :)

Nah, menar inte att dina texter vore plagiat, bara att era texter ter sig lika för mig. Helt snyggt skrivet... Vad kan jag säga? Lite opersonligt formulerat fastän innehållet kanske var väldigt personligt. Men du är mycket duktig yao. Propps...
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2005-06-23 16:57
Forumsignatur: Tackar. Kul att det gillas!

Crew: Hehe, jag tar det som en komplimang så de lugnt:)
Tackar, kul att du tycker om crewstah!

Holla.
I'm Superman! King fucking Kong! I can pick you up and throw you a million miles. I'm number one. Number fucking one. I'm number one. Number fucking one. Number one! Number one! Number one!