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Playing piano on the keyboard...

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2005-06-18 01:20

Playing piano on the keyboard...

Holding a roasted paper, known to be boasting flagrant
One of the most amazing, escaping within my poetry
Y’all noticed me but who’s ever seen me win emotionally
the blended potions be the commencement in my senses
flipped the script with the pens and vented my entrance
invented the tension of a multie starting without ending
did mention what I’m sending over instrumentals bending-
earlobes; meeting global dissarray, just a distance away
missing the pace in the beat, while beating the pace
meeting a fleeing race of raving lunatics craving rhymes
saving time by flanging the angle of my waypoints
stuck, tangled in a weaved web, dangling by the joints
projected, a scilent entity, an identity waiting to get anointed
I’m appointed to stay sick eventhough my pen is illin’
Bending, filling, sending, drilling; send in the willing
Meant to amend the stature of a fullfilled homosapien
The mono’s shaping in, taping sins to escape again
Take the pen, you can have it back, as a matter of fact
You already smothered my habitat, brother grab the act
I really love the stab in the back, glad that you cracked
My crackelated surface sees no purpose of being nervous
I’m just a simple subservient serving the learning sense
Been burning since the Phoenix last went up in flames
Casted as the last to be stuck with a fucking name
Nowadays it’s numbers, right here for those that slumber
The dumber will awake as morning comes to day
The boring runs away while those that listen stay
To not miss the date where the wait for an end is close
Lending blows for you to puff; while tempting foes
Cuz we’ll all come to an end as far as ending goes
This here is the last stop, the final halt of destinations
So close your eyes and wait for the cause of innovations

So with one finger on the trigger and one lousy call away
We’ll wait for the final hour living on this ball of clay...

"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."
---Albert Einstein

2005-06-18 21:02
tomb?
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-06-19 16:13
sleep is the cousin of death...
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-06-19 23:41
I wrote this in invisible ink....
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-06-20 00:31
Tight. Du rimmar som ingen annan på whoa iaf. :)
"Jasså?Därför som White Lions fått så mycket skit av media?Sveriges farligaste klack,hell yeah" - Zow P16

2005-06-20 00:36
riktigt bra
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2005-06-20 00:38
Damn vilket flow! haha shit.. sicko...

nu till innehållet:

bra ordval och du beskriver allt bra.. riktigt snyggt...

kan inte riktigt dra ut nån favorit rad då allt håller samma höga klass... nice shiaat helt enkelt..

vet inte riktigt vad ja ska säga asså.. bara Wow typ... riktigt bra

peace

2005-06-22 00:21
tack tack...det kommer mer...
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2005-06-22 00:32
störd förmåga att hitta passande ord och smidiga lösningar på snygga rim.. det är klockrent varje gång, men blr småtråkgt ibland.. vore kul att se hur du skriver "avskalat"
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2005-10-01 14:56
I en hel annan liga på whoa. Dina texter är oftast för bra för den vanlige whoamedlemmen att läsa, ^^

Härligt flow, bra struktur med sköna rim, en del bra formuleringar men också en del som inte riktigt var 100%. Mkt hög kvalitet överlag.

//Peace

2005-10-01 19:52
hehe shit jättegammal text...oh well dope shit still
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>