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Joto - A dreamers dream

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   
Producent

2005-05-15 00:24

Joto - A dreamers dream

tja.. jag har skrivit ännu en text... det är seriös shit...


Verse:
Ey yo I dreamed a dream, and in the dream I was planting seeds//
Because I´ve been cutting me, to see how much my arms bleed//
I was planting seeds, they are called seeds of the human suciedy//
Because if I lose my life, the earth will gain a new, surprisely//
You can lose a precious person, and you can lose even more//
You can meet them in heaven, and talk about, days on the shore//
But think over it carefully because the only solution is not suicide//
You can get over it, but it is hard, like it was for you and I//
I have said it once and I say it again, life is a stupid game//
No one has survived it, game over, the thing that´s left is a name//
We are not ashamed, if we just do what we have to do//
But you will, if you dont listen on and care about your crew//
And other things in this dream, everyone had inner voices//
That said you where misstakes, that suicide was the only choice//
I could not stop them all, and that maked me want to scream//
That was when I understood, I was in a dreamers dream//

Chorus:
You.. You do not make that misstake//
They are getting many more, with this thoughts in my age//
And while I perform the stage, many people are dying//
Getting murdered, making suicide, or maybe just are trying//
Natural deaths, anyway the life is hiding in any corner//
Soldiers murders in war, but they are just taking orders//
So who is the scum that must suffer for every single life//
It is us humans, we are the reason that I cant sleep at night//

Verse:
In another dream, I and my friends were digging in earth//
I heard someone scream, was he maybe getting hurt//
He was all bloody , so we didn´t dare to touch him//
He was praying for allah, I guess he was a muslim//
So we rushed in, getting bandage for all the cuts in his skin//
He had cutted himself, we gived him first aid, but we didn´t win//
He lost his life, but luckily it was just a stupid nightmare//
It was scary because it felt like I was right there//
So I turned on Atmosphere, listening and thinking//
If I were a kind off ship I would already be sinking//
And be a ghost ship, tricking people out on the sea//
Out there i would disapear and take everbody with me//
Like the japanese Kamekaze, suicidalbombers//
They took many life with them to the eternal slumber//
But still, still it´s just a thought in my and many others heart//
You do not want to kill yourself, you just need a new start//

Chorus:
You.. You do not make that misstake//
They are getting many more, with this thoughts in my age//
And while I perform the stage, many people are dying//
Getting murdered, making suicide, or maybe just are trying//
Natural deaths, anyway the life is hiding in any corner//
Soldiers murders in war, but they are just taking orders//
So who is the scum that must suffer for every single life//
It is us humans, we are the reason that I cant sleep at night//


ajja.... lämna gärna kritik eller kommentar...

kyss och smek.. :D // Joto

When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold
Producent

2005-05-15 10:42
thx wonder....
When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold
Producent

2005-05-15 11:01
-kepa- faktiskt... så börjar jag ganska många texter utan varken "ey yo" eller "yo".... Sök på mina texter så förstår du :P
och även om du inte läst ännu är det väll ändå lite onödigt och fokusera sig på en enda fras? fast jag ska inte kommentera din kommentar... kyss och smek :P
When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold
Producent

2005-05-15 15:41
-kepa- det e lugnt.. hade inte tänkt göra det heller :P
When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold

2005-05-15 16:33
Nice text, mkt bra flow när man rappar vid det, gäller bara att hitta det rätta beatet så att man kan känna den riktiga känslan. Mycket bra inlevelse.. Du utvecklas mycket..fortsätt så!
- Shizzle

2005-05-15 17:09
soooft som fan...dina texter e helt sjukt bra...
diggar hårt..:)
keep it up dawg;P
peace!
-hämndlysten som jag är kommer jag och spöar din slappa pappa, slätar över din mamma, hell yeah im a motherfucka-
Producent

2005-05-15 19:49
thx alla.. det värmer att ni gillar.... propps
When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold

2005-05-15 21:58
shit va du är bra joto!!
jättebra texter... testa o kicka nån av dom också!!! blir säkert skitbra.. fan va härlig text alltså!!!
Puss(K)
Producent

2005-05-15 22:25
det blire säkert clutt... ;)
When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold
Producent

2005-05-15 23:07
upp.... vill få mer kritik på denna :D
When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold

2005-05-16 17:29
den var bra , du håller dig till ett och samma tema! rimmen var bra med.-
"Jag har inget skelett i garderoben / jag har en hel kyrkogård i källaren" - Organism 12

2005-05-18 09:06
Jag använde mig av sk. ironi . Bara så du vet.
Producent

2005-05-18 21:03
musik_ jo hehe :P

cluttisch jag använde mig också av sk. ironi :P


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When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold
Producent

2005-07-19 20:17
uuuppp....
When Life Gives You Lemons You Paint That Shit Gold