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Andrew - Tired of Strife. [16 bars]

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2004-11-15 17:03

Andrew - Tired of Strife. [16 bars]

Im tired of strife, wanna sit back and retire from life..
Desire to escape, this place, it just requires a knife..
Body is just weak from work, I need to leave this earth..
My stomach's bleedin hurt, from fuckin eatin dirt..
I try to harness-my-rage, but it turns to carnage-on-page..
To say you'll commit suicide is easy, but it's hard-to-display..
Everything's broken down, is there no hope around?..
Should I scream and burn, or just choke and drown..
I was prevoked and clowned, my grave is sworn..
When I cry my heart out, a whole new lake is formed..
A slave was borned, pray that God'll cast away tha storm..
Even tha most perfect of roses, contains some thorns..
I've faced it, my place is..below the ground tonight..
I say..stop fearing death, and just know that your bound to die...
Should I risk it all, and fall, or rot of caution..
I'd keep on goin, but I'm exhausted from exhaustion...

 

2004-11-15 18:55
tack så mkt..skönt att se att nån kommenterar iaf=)
 

2004-11-15 23:29
upp..
 

2004-11-16 16:25
aah oki men övning ger ju färdighet så snart sitter nog grammatiken också..
 

2004-11-16 16:29
Riktigt skön text.

Bra inledning.

Im tired of strife, wanna sit back and retire from life..
Desire to escape, this place, it just requires a knife..

Bra ordval i hela texten, på rätt nivå.. Så att den inte är på "fuck u nuggah" nivån i engelska.. lr Hwarang engelskan
Som jag ibland tror han hittar på egna svåra ord, bara för att retas med oss dumma människor :)

Men texten var iaf nice.. vill se dig droppa mer :)

2004-11-17 00:21
aah tack så mkt, kul att höra=)