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Memento...Bob is dead...

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2004-11-08 23:32

Memento...Bob is dead...

Tänkte testa något annorlunda...började skriva från slutet så det e kanske därför det kan vara lite osammanhängande ibland, har inte orkat ordna till detta.
början e slutet och början e slutet...läs åt vilket håll du känner för...



bob is dead…
two logs over the legs, power lines over the head
saw through the logs seeing it falling like a ledge
gotta clear the trees for the electricty feed
the cold roads are bumpy be efficient with speed
listen we need around four people for this job
boss calls to the home asking loud after Bob
he shouts at the boss slamming the door in his face
the boss listens while he cracks jokes bout his taste
Bob speaks about his women in latex with whips
his wife whispers in his ear ’bout taking a trip
she threw the porcelain vase through the face of the painting
she asks him why he's always busy with racing n training
my wife's calling my phone gotta take it quick
do I really need it? the condom wont stick
the tv is on, their making love to the music but ooops
her breasts peeks at him ready to blow just like nukes
he slowly unveils her beautiful body and chest
let's meet at the motel I think it's the best
hunny I'm off to the track, I'll be coming right back
two beeps on the pager, a phone call later
and she also rides with him home from the school
his daughter, the one who doesn't like her's a fool
talking about how she's bullied and misliked
come pick jenny up she got in to a giant fist fight
the fist breaks her front tooth making it bleed
this is the last remark look she' just want's to read
he loves driving his child to the school any day
she laughs and says that it doesn't matter anyways
when did abe lincoln die and why he is dead
hurry start making your bed i'll be making the bread
she missed the last buss now she's late for the class
last night was a blast but too much beer on his ass
his wife screams why didn't you wake her up?
the clock beeps a third time but he snoozed it up

"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."
---Albert Einstein

2004-11-10 12:58
Intressant textstruktur, förutom ett par smärre stavfel som du säkert kan fixa när du korrekturläser den så är detta väldigt intressant. Skulle knappast tro att det är ett nytt påfund men här på whoa postas det iaf knappast mkt texter som kan knytas ihop på ett sådant här sätt. En av de bättre texterna denna månad.

/Peace man

2004-11-10 17:17
tokigt bra.. kul att du kör
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2004-11-10 23:22
word...
"I know not with what weapons World War III will be fought, but World War IV will be fought with sticks and stones."<br> ---Albert Einstein <br>

2004-11-11 13:34
Upp, sov inte på denna folk.

2004-11-11 13:51
rolig idé och bra utförd. läste den här för nån dag sen, måste missat att skriva i den bara. roligt att folk provar nytt
norman bates behemot
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