första texten
Ok, första texten någonsin. Velat testa o skriva nåt länge men har aldrig kommit på nåt o skriva om. Rätt skabbig antar jag men skulle gärna vilja ha lite tips hur jag kan göra det bättre. Är det för mkt text per rad? För lite? För kassa o pinsamma rim eller funkar det? Tycker själv en del grejer låter rätt pinsamma men ka ninte riktigt sätta fingret på just vad som behöver åtgärdas.
Hur som helst, här kommer den.
Ok, I’ma tell ya what’s up
Every time I hear your name I feel like piss in a cup
I dont even like you but i must give you my money
You make us look like clowns man it ain’t even funny
Oh, sorry, rhyming isn’t my thing
I’ll put your crown on ya head again and kiss your ring
Hmm, nope, thats a fat stinkin lie
A second doesn’t pass without me wishing you die
I just wonder when the rest is gonna see you’re fake
Your intelligence’s somewhere between mr Bush and an ape
Haha, I’ma diss you til my pen starts to bleed
You won’t even feel it cause you can’t even read
I know, don’t mean you have a worthless mind
But let’s face it, you’re not exactly Albert Einstein
You should have credit though, for stickin in this far
You even getaway with speeding with your shiny ass car
Oh, and did I mention your wife?
Her face looks like it’s been cut up by a big fat knife
And then stitched together with some paste and glue
Like Mengele's shit to jews in the world war two
You skanky hoe, you know that we know
Your history’s about as white as piss in snow
Together you two are aperfect couple
A nazi and a dumbass it can’t get any better
Ok, I’m all done now you can start to cry
And when your done suck it up cause youre going to die, good bye