aigh, here goes.. Waffles, this line was funny: "you think your´e a gangsta but got the IQ of a corkscrew." although this punch, cuz it´s actually a punch, has 1 flaw. See, that corkscrew shit makes it funny. But it´s still not THAT on point. Why? becouse they way you phrased it, indicates that a gangsta is smart. And that´s not always necessary the case. as you know there´s plenty of dumb gangstas out there. So in that regard, the line wasn´t all that ill.. But it was funny doe, and still better than any of knucklehead´s verse. And while I´m at it, I might add this.. Knucklehead-no hatin on ya dawg, but yo, what´s with the name? You just about lost the battle ´fore it even started, with a name like that. Trust me, it´s hard to take a cat seriously, when he´s rockin a lame name like that. Real talk. This battle was so-so, pretty one sided. And waffles had this one. All the way. Knucklehead-don´t be a knucklehead next time. And come prepared! You´ll need harder hittin lines. And try to put some funny shit in there. If you can´t, or won´t go for quality-at least go for funny. that way you might can still take the battle if you got some chuckle inducing lines.. Ok? This here´s just honest advice, step ya game up cat and bring a li´l more to the table next time aigh? and if you gone put slang in your verses, learn to get the hang of yer slang before you do, you smell what I´m singin? keep writin. and don´t quit.
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