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Life is a Phenomenon! R.I.P min vän!

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2013-04-08 11:24

Life is a Phenomenon! R.I.P min vän!

En liten text jag började skriva på här igår. En nära vän gick bort i cancer igår bara 24 år gammal så lättade lite på hjärtat och skrev ett par rader. Söker hjälp i min engelska, ser ni några grammatik fel osv får ni gärna märka ut dom :)

One Love!

Life is a phenomenon!
No one knows why we struggle so hard, week after week
Trying to be the best, no rest for the soul, i speak for the weak
A spokesman, not choosen but risen from feelings so strong
Faithless i flow behind time a true free beeing in its form
Seeing friends passing by, drugs, bad feelings i deni
No justice in this world when the youth is left bleeding and die
No need to fight, we are all trapped in the big wheel on earth
Not noing why but all of a sudden you can read my words
To many people lives life to fast, infact we have to stop and smile
Because out of stress comes nothing nice , so stop and smile
Stop and smile for the friends living high, Stop and smile
For the enemies , let me se you stop and smile
For the love and hate I smile, thats all i can do, stand tall and strong
For the friends i love , i reach out my hands with an guardian song

Words of freedom, nesta the spokesman jammin with friends
I have let pass by knowing that they will stop and laugh in the end
Its nasty my friend, but we all unite inna freedom far away
Where them will speak the name, still inna future far away

far away, mind free leading the speach,
pieces on the wall telling us all to stay, free minded, the peace aint far away

Minutes passing by, we can all laugh at time
But in the end we all gonna face the hammer smashing life
Into pieces, floating in a flow of words, memorial rap
Into a piece on the wall, timeless graffiti all glory to that
Another day roling in, my glowing spliff is burning to an end
Got a problem to tell so im turning to a friend, no journy will end
Without tears, event the hearts of the enemies turns into friends

Peace!

One puff, Two Puffs i know Teraq goin' nuts som vanligt
Med biggie och pac phat flowar med Bob Marley
Myspace: In memory of teraq
Poet

2013-04-09 08:51
Tyckte det var fint skrivet, lite stavfel här och var (är för trött för att markera ut dom, kanske gör det senare)

Beklagar sorgen!
Sötnosarna Represent!
"Klart att hiphopen dör ut när alla sitter och hatar"
- Fronda

2013-04-09 11:55
Tackar Spades!
One puff, Two Puffs i know Teraq goin' nuts som vanligt
Med biggie och pac phat flowar med Bob Marley
Myspace: In memory of teraq

2013-04-10 19:43
Det vore väldigt gött om jag kunde få lite rättelse på det som är fel i texten, gramatik, stavfel osv.

Håller på och pluggar på min engelska lite, därav att den kanske inte är helt grammatiskt korrekt.
One puff, Two Puffs i know Teraq goin' nuts som vanligt
Med biggie och pac phat flowar med Bob Marley
Myspace: In memory of teraq
Moderator

2013-04-10 21:50
One Love!

Life is a phenomenon!
No one knows why we struggle so hard, week after week
Trying to be the best, no rest for the soul, i speak for the weak
A spokesman, not chosen but risen from feelings so strong
Faithless i flow behind time a true free beeing in its form
Seeing friends passing by, drugs, bad feelings i deny
No justice in this world when the youth is left bleeding and die(s?)
No need to fight, we are all trapped in the big wheel on earth
Not knowing why but all of a sudden you can read my words
Too many people lives life too fast, infact we have to stop and smile
Because out of stress comes nothing nice , so stop and smile
Stop and smile for the friends living high, Stop and smile
For the enemies , let me se you stop and smile
For the love and hate I smile, thats all i can do, stand tall and strong
For the friends i love , i reach out my hands with an guardian song

Words of freedom, nesta(va?) the spokesman jammin with friends
I have let pass by knowing that they will stop and laugh in the end
Its nasty my friend, but we all unite in a freedom far away
Where they will speak the name, still in a future far away

far away, mind free leading the speach,
pieces on the wall telling us all to stay, free minded, the peace aint far away

Minutes passing by, we can all laugh at time
But in the end we all gonna face the hammer smashing life
Into pieces, floating in a flow of words, memorial rap
Into a piece on the wall, timeless graffiti all glory to that
Another day roling in, my glowing spliff is burning to an end
Got a problem to tell so im turning to a friend, no journy will end
Without tears, event the hearts of the enemies turns into friends

Det var väl det jag kunde peka ut var fel, vet inte om Jonas har hittat nåt annat?

I övrigt, grym text!
And I was better where I was miserable, why didn't you leave me there?
Poet

2013-04-13 18:32
Faithless i flow behind time a true free being in its form

Det var nog bara den du missade Trixie! :)
Sötnosarna Represent!
"Klart att hiphopen dör ut när alla sitter och hatar"
- Fronda

2013-04-24 15:49
Tackar igen :D
One puff, Two Puffs i know Teraq goin' nuts som vanligt
Med biggie och pac phat flowar med Bob Marley
Myspace: In memory of teraq

2013-04-25 09:39
Tycker den är bra!
http://www.herrbitter.blogg.se/