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Sederos - Friendship is a bitch

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2010-10-16 21:11

Sederos - Friendship is a bitch

You know nowadays you dont know who you can call a friend or your enemy
Or who you can trust or the person you should stay the fuck away from


Listen up I have a story that needs to be told
Ever since I've been 18 years old
I've felt like shit like I got a uncureable cold
It all started when I was seventeen
smoking mary jane everyday my dad told me I was obscen
But I didnt care what he had to say
I had my ''friends'' that i thought backed me everyday
Everytime they got into trouble
I jumped in and got into a squable
It felt like we would be friends for a 100 years
But when I needed a hand They didnt care
They stopped calling acted like I had a virus
Talking shit about me when I wasnt around like minnors
They didnt apreciate my friendship
So I got real mad and gave one of them a fat lip
Since then we lost our connection
months later I started to pay attention
How they went from buddaheads into drug themes
Shooting heorin sniffing coke feeling grand supreme
I tried to help one of them a childhood friend
but he told me to fuck off so I said enough
I was tired being stepped on like a door mat
I was tired of having friends that are sociopaths
So I took a step back and I took the right track
like a tram studying hard and finally I got my exams
A few weeks later we got back in touch
With the whole bunch acted like they've changed much
Chillin and riding smoking philly ones
I was a dumb teenager thinking they changed
But they were the same stupid and deranged
Now I know u cant trust no one but your family
Cause if u do it will only end in a tragedy


säg vad ni tycker om texten och vad jag borde förbättra! Tack

Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth

2010-10-16 21:14
menar *dont inte do på den sista raden
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth
Rappare

2010-10-17 19:52
FETT!
dä ä näääjs brur!

2010-10-18 00:47
tack skulle uppskatta lite åsikter om min text :)
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth
Poet

2010-10-18 16:15
Tycker att du får fram budskapet på ett snyggt sätt, och du formulerar dig ganska bra.
Det enda som jag tyckte var "tråkigt" var själva rimmen (ja jag är rimfixerad i textsammanhang) som inte var så superkomplicerade - dock var resten snyggt uppbyggt.

Flowet var en annan grej jag hade svårt att hitta - fick det mest att låta som en dikt / spoken word...

Men som sagt - texten i sig (läs budskapet) är grym!
keep it up - man blir aldrig sämre ;)
Sötnosarna Represent!
"Klart att hiphopen dör ut när alla sitter och hatar"
- Fronda

2010-10-18 17:58
ok tack för din feedback uppskattas!
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth

2010-10-19 16:35
upp

du vet va jag tycker redan :)
En bit av allt och inget

2010-10-19 19:26
ja det vet jag, tack för uppen behöver fler åsikter!
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth

2010-10-23 21:43
upp! En låt som inte handlar om ''fuck polisen'' eller ''sälja knark'' behöver lite support här!
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth