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(Storytelling) Asty - Think about it

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2010-04-07 22:09

(Storytelling) Asty - Think about it

Storrytelling där jag har olika scenario på verserna.
Tredje versen inte färdig, den röda tråden i texten kommer bindas i reffrängen där själva budskapet kommer vara att Tänka sig för , där av låt namnet '' Think About It''.. Nuff said, här kommer lyriken !!





Verse 1
My time was up i had to get home ,
I took the bus that day, little did I know//

that the same girl sitting just in front of me,
was gonna have a nightmare of teenage pregnancy//

as I left I could see her happy chatting on the phone,
I kept walking home quick didn’t wanna miss the tv show//

opened the door to my apartment , at the same time,
as she jumped of the bus , some guy was ready for some jail time//

cuz without thinking he followed her up ,
and when he was alone with her he smashed her face in the dirt//

she begged him to stop but he didn’t leave,
as he knocked her unconscious, he committed the sin//

he ran away , she woke up alone at the hospital,
didn’t remember nothing, only getting of at the bus stop//

and that day her life was ruined ,bad news,
one kid on the way , and no money for food//
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verse 2
Time just passed midnight as the rolled up ,
smoked a blunt , loading their guns//

talking bout money they wanted the Benjamin’s,
as they walked to the car they where ready for action//

they drove through the night looking for the best spot,
as they passed the red lights they saw the perfect little gift shop//

they pulled up , masked and heavily armed,
Strapped with one gun each , and a bag around their arms//

jimmy hesitated , but his pal called him out,
said ‘’ think about the money bro ,you could use the dough’’//

jimmy got out , ran in side the shop raised the gun,
and yelled at the clerk ,told him how little his life was worth//

but as he looked back and saw his friend enter the shop,
the clerk got his shotgun ,and shot him in the guts//

and his friend ran off ,the cops had no suspects,
but jimmy was gone, another young boy shot dead//

Nuff' Said!


2010-04-08 11:00
De här är tungt shit asså =) Gillar den som fan skön inlevelse.
blir de nått du kommer spela in eller ?

Big up

One // Malin
 

2010-04-08 14:18
Tack som fan du , ja planen är att skriva till en tredje vers och jobba fram en reffräng. JAg har en viss ide om hur de ska bli och sedan är de mikrofonbåset som väntar..

// Love

Nuff' Said!


2010-04-09 16:37
andra versen var tääänghare
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2010-04-09 22:14
Thanks mate.
Nuff' Said!


2010-04-10 01:25
känner att det krävs mer för att få helhetskänslan som krävs i den här typen av texter.. saknas en gnutta inlevelse och detaljer..
men idén och storyn är vacker! no doubt!

frid
Great som Tony Tiger!

2010-04-10 16:50
Den var soft =). jobba mer med texten, lägg till lite små detaljer så blir den grym =)
Det finns så många rappare, men ingen som mig !

2010-04-10 23:28
Silver_k : Tack för kritiken ,, allt de här med inlevelse och känsla o så kommer ju mycket med beatet och effekterna när jag spelar in o en massa andra små detaljer..



Trigo: tack som fan , tack för kritiken !


// love
Nuff' Said!


2010-04-11 17:52
bra text och intressant.
www.myspace.com/mcrish

2010-04-12 00:52

and his friend ran off ,the cops had no suspects,
but jimmy was gone, another young boy shot dead//
- tyckte den va riktigt najs.

annars en helt okej text, är väl lite mer rimbög i smaken personligen kanske.
www.myspace.com/kdlwilen

2010-04-21 00:03
tackar :D fler?
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2010-05-05 16:08
ingen?
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2010-08-20 18:13
upp?
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2010-08-25 20:54
I like it, hojt på mig vid inspelade versionen! :D
http://blog.whoa.nu/2011/08/18/anxious-feat-dizzy-enough
www.youtube.com/user/DizzyEntertainment89

2010-09-28 21:13
will do :) fler
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2011-04-04 15:43
uppar en sista gång nu då :D
Nuff' Said!