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som sagt det här är det första jag har skrivit men jag skulle gärna vilja ha lite kritik så säg vad ni tycker och kom gärna med tips på hur jag kan bli bättre på skriva pz
Hey big bro, hey my lil sis.
Reminisce a life that you and I missed.
My candle was your birthday wished.
A hug and kiss or a bandaid on your wrist.
Sorry it all had to end up like this.
Mom was just a kid, didn't know what she did.
You weren't a mistake, but a gift from God made to create.
A joy moms didn't know she could take.
A regret now, she knows she did wrong.
Accept my apology for her in this song.
Sitting here starin into space my world this world is a krazy place everday we wake another invisible bullet we face the bad memories we erase but with new ones we replace this rap music i embrace thanks god for this wonderful grace stay close to home in the streets evil roams or i will take them with me lyrical dome set em straight before they reach heavens gate