5min text. Kritik tack.
Aloha. Har inte skrivit en "hiphop"- text på flera år. Men nu kände jag att det var dags att pröva. Skrev på engelska, såklart finns garanterat stavfel/grammatikfel. Men jag tänkte ändå höra vad folk här inne tycker. Funderar på att kanske kicka nån låt i framtiden, men vet inte. Skrev en text idag, höll på 5min, sen blev jag less.
Ive got a problem, im mentaly ill
Went to the doktor who said - Here, take this happy pill
Fuck you, i need something better, i need help now
Nobody cares, the doktor, the nurse, no not even my mom
Im laying here, in my own bed
Afraid to go out, afraid to drop down dead.
What the fuck is wrong with me? I dont know
I took some tests, but they didnt show.
REF
I dont want this, im trapped in my own body
- Hello, somebody there? Help. Any answering? No nobody
I drink to stay calm, i drink untill i passes out
I cant belive this, im a boy in a glashouse.
I never saw this comming
It came fast and silent, like americas atombombings.
For a year ago, i felt fine
I was happy, strong, hanged with the friends of mine.
Now the anxiety does that im afraid for everything
Ive got Palpitations, and it makes me think crazy things.