Illusion - What will I become? (First english song in years)

Illusion - What will I become? (First english song in years)

Okej, jag har saknat inspiration ett tag nu och inte droppat audio eller skrivit särskilt mycket texter. Mer än fåordiga sessions skrivna på en halvtimme har jag nog inte skrivit något på ett halvår.

Men idag satte jag mig ner och verkligen försökte. Och är väl sådär nöjd med resultatet. Första seriösa texten på länge, och typ min andra engelska text någonsin. Så, ge gärna kritik.

Den är inte särskilt genomarbetad. Men ska fila lite på den (utifrån er eventuella kritik) och sen kanske spela in!

I'm starting to become another human, but let so be it then
All I know is that now I'm really fed up of thinking
I ain't up from quitting life - but I feel like
God has given up on me - that I don't fit in this life
But I still ain't tired, and I'm on my way up
Beginning to wake up - not going to stay put
But - In this position I'm in
I don't know what to do, just know that I'm gonna win
My fight against fate, not going to quit again
And that's when y'all come in - I really need a friend
I've really felt depressed at times - but that's okay
cuz all I need to is take one step at a time
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You can do what you want, you can torture me
I just don't know yet, what I ought to be
One day I may be gone, or maybe I'll succeed
Right now, not even I know what I feel
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I could really use a hand in my struggle of life
And I know that I'm gonna get in trouble at times
But in the end I will clear every obstacle
It will be easy - if I just stay positive
With my brothers I'll get to the top of the world
And it'll feel just like we're walking to work
Man, I may just be talking blank words
All I can do is hope as if I were in a church
One day I may be gone, or maybe I'll succeed
Right now, not even I know what I feel
Maybe you'll catch me, smokin' on weed
Or maybe you'll - one day -here my quotes on the streets
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You can do what you want, you can torture me
I just don't know yet, what I ought to be
One day I may be gone, or maybe I'll succeed
Right now, not even I know what I feel

Det jag själv inte tycker är särskilt bra är väl reffen. Hade en, men skrotade den då den inte blev bra, och skrev ihop den nuvarande lite snabbt.