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Soul - songbird

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2009-03-05 17:26

Soul - songbird

I've been slacking off. I'm sorry 'bout that.

v. 1
i wish still had control over it, or maybe it's the other way around
the other day I found that I've got nothing to show for it
every chance I had at happiness I let slip out of my hands so fast
I guess that I am glancing back for that that is...
a girl who wanna see passed this mask that cast such a shadow
whatever happened in the past has passed it doesn't matter
haven't you had enough of battles? you don't have to mask your agony
in bad theatrics & act as the character you imagined that you had to be
as for me I see past this façade of awkward smirks and distance
what will it take for you to see that god this girl is different
that maybe trust & truth came to life in the graceful guise
of a redhead with soft lips long lashes & hazel eyes
an angels eyes incarnate that could stabilize
& clear the cumulous clouded thoughts from the fateful skies of august
it didn’t turn out the way he expected, the distaste & detest
faded the second he buried his face in her neck & made him lay down his weapon..
to trust’s outta character cus to him nothing is scarier
than crushing these barriers just cus he cares for her
she may deserve something different, he has a way with words
but can’t form a sentence fitting of what he wants to say to her
ignoring the thorn in his side he feels more normal and alive
when he catches her looking at him from the corner of his eye
nothing in life reflects him the way her pupil do
if he could stay there he’d be happy, trapped in her idea of beautiful

v.2
she sleep lightly with her legs crossed and her hands
at the sides of her head, she gets them tangled in her red locks
taking the edge off her angelic demeanor leaving a serenely
sleeping girl dreaming in between the sheets of my bed lost…
in the broken realm of strindberg plays & motion films
the whimsical props & intricate plots leave her overwhelmed
I had a walk-on as a guy different from decisions poorly pondered
Borrowing monologues from the cast just to make the story longer
My soaring songbird, more of an angel than I’d imagined
Til I caught her changing, disguising her halo as a diadem
In the dark I saw an inkling of all her, divinity
Seeping through the poorly patched up kinks in her armor
I think this alarmed her so she keeps to the spotlight so we
can’t see the beauty pouring out cus she thinks it’s could harm her
I don’t care if you’re truly intact, if it’s not broken
I won’t fix it, and if something is, I’ll find beauty in that
Believe me I will, even if it’s not easy, I will
Even if no one understands it completely, I will


a work in progress.
drop some thoughts.
one.

life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2009-03-05 20:04
definetaly - top 3 or better on this site. förstår att många sover på sånt här, "långa tråkiga engelska texter".. men daamn holmez.. för o ta ett snabbt exempel som drog uppmärksamhet först i texten:

a girl who wanna see passed this mask that cast such a shadow
whatever happened in the past has passed it doesn't matter
haven't you had enough of battles? you don't have to mask your agony
in bad theatrics & act as the character you imagined that you had to be


shiit... de mesta av resten var oxå quotebart, tungt. längesen du skrev, keep that shit uup.

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2009-03-06 11:34

'ppreciate it eighty. kör mer på kvalitet än kvantitet, hoppas jag iaf. ska försöka droppa more regularly but thanks for the love.

do your thing.

one.
life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2009-03-07 13:28
Anyone?
life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2009-03-07 13:41
Tungt skit.
 

2009-03-08 20:47
skit bra verkligen en av de bästa på engelska texter här i forumet
Fuck mainstream and there commersial sound, bigg it up for the underground

2009-03-09 21:34
tack tack båda två. släng gärna in lite konstruktiv kritik eller nåt om ni har tid.

peace.
life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2009-03-10 03:39
Jag hade gjort det om jag kunde, men asså jag tycker att jag e hyfsat bra på att skriva engelska texter men detta är ju långt över min nivå... Så det e lite svårt att säga nått som bör förbättras känner jag... :)
Fuck mainstream and there commersial sound, bigg it up for the underground

2009-03-12 14:10


up.
life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2009-03-12 19:57
god damn nice!
www.znapmusic.com/jungsub - checka!

2009-03-13 16:21

kul att få lite kärlek, inte alltid mina texter uppmärksammas. one
life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2009-03-16 15:29

one for the road.
life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2010-02-21 13:12
Different, beautiful. En av mina favoriter.

2010-02-21 22:05
styr upp studiotid, på ett eller annat vis. det är allt jag säger :)
först då kanske det blir möjligt att ge lite konstruktiv kritik, nu har jag absolut ingenting att klaga på.

frid!
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2010-02-21 22:37
du är verkligen jävligt bra. av någon anledning har jag dock för mig att det inte skulle låta lika bra på beats. men du kanske inte alls rappar, så vad spelar det för roll? och du kanske motbevisar mig, så vad spelar det för roll? rader jag gillar:


she may deserve something different, he has a way with words
but can’t form a sentence fitting of what he wants to say to her


I don’t care if you’re truly intact, if it’s not broken
I won’t fix it, and if something is, I’ll find beauty in that
Believe me I will, even if it’s not easy, I will
Even if no one understands it completely, I will
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2010-02-22 11:20

wanna

tack. det är såhär jag vill att alla mina texter ska vara.

ranch

haha. du råkar inte känna någon som känner någon som känner någon har en?
några favvo rader som stod ut?

one!

quynh

much appreciated, much appreciated. jag vet faktiskt inte men jag håller med lite på något sätt ang att det skulle låta bättre utan beat men jag är ingen spoken word artist. får väl kämpa för att motbevisa.
jävligt schysst att du tog ut favvo raderna också. sånt man gillar att se liksom.

one!
life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.

2010-02-28 17:02
Sant, tack för tipset! Helt klart mer känsla och sjukt vacker! Favoritraderna:

haven't you had enough of battles? you don't have to mask your agony
in bad theatrics & act as the character you imagined that you had to be


she sleep lightly with her legs crossed and her hands
at the sides of her head, she gets them tangled in her red locks
taking the edge off her angelic demeanor leaving a serenely
sleeping girl dreaming in between the sheets of my bed lost


den senare kan bli så sjukt snyggt fraserad! skulle vara jävligt spännande att höra hur du gör med den! mitt band eller rättare sagt dj:n och producenten i bandet har en studio. om han har tid och lust kanske du skulle kunna få spela in där!

Peace!
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2010-03-03 13:33

Hempzee

fan va nice att du kolla. 'preciated.

hur menar du med snyggt fraserd? eller, jag förstår vad du menar jag menade mer om du har något inspel? när jag spottar den känns den lite.. sage francis-ish. vilket funkar för mig. :-)

cool. you seem like a cool dude. var ligger studion?

one.

life is still a bitch....
but sometimes to unwind she lets me feel her tits.