C-J- wake up, se how my life is!

C-J- wake up, se how my life is!

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i'll write down evertything i say,
theres so many things i wanna clame.
i've been thrue a lot of shame
so now,i wanna taste a piece of fame.
want to be famous,to be seen and heard
wanna fly high just like a bird.
and then i wanna disapear without a trace,
just see how it feels to get away from all the grace.

i want people to remember my face,
i want'em to wanna be in my shoe and lace.
want'em to know how it feels,
not to be able to go outside without being chased.

I would like to be invisable,
just like Harry potter in his coat,
walking around not being visible.
stop writing theese words,
that everybody thinks are fenomenal.
Dont wanna be this superman,
who people think is unstoppable.
To them i'm just a machine
spitting out words that makes'em all kinda addicted.
just like coffeine
hell yeah i know my cd's are clean.
but hey giive me som breathingspace
or i'll start say things that are both wrong and mean.
Just stop, my mouth will soon explode.
like on the commercial for Listerine

i just wanna go somewhere else and stop shining,
shut up, i dont give a fuck if you think i'm grining.
cause i've worked harder than a man in the mining
I just need to stop for a while,
feels like i've ran a thousand mile.
maybe i'll work my self to death,
if you'd like to know something it'll stand in my file.
i just dont want some cameras and people,
standing in front of my grave with a wide smile,
just so the papers got something to write about.
that's probably how it gonna be, no doubt,
but if it will, i'll revive my self and shout .
Peace