I början av Januari 2014 låstes Whoa och du kan alltså ej logga in eller skriva något nytt i forumen. Innehåll i forum osv kommer finnas tillgängligt. Läs Mer »

Snälla Hjälp Mejj ! Behöver verkligen synpunkter

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2008-09-30 21:04

Snälla Hjälp Mejj ! Behöver verkligen synpunkter

håller på med en engelsk text. behöver feedback


ursäkta stav/grammatik fel.


Text:


The life that's brake down, feels like you drown//
You make progress, But it still feels hopeless Somehow//
Getting Plowed of the road, by a force that you can' t resist//
A girl make you feel dissed, even if you're getting a wonderfull kiss//
What a bitch, you dont diserve to get treated like this, and why, and wht did she do it?//
We could take it easy, just bit for bit, we were a perfect match as the ball in a baseball mitt//
And i will not quit, i just love you too mutch//
The whole world light up, when we touch//
We clutched, from the start to the end//
The time that i spend just pretend, that we could be more then friends//