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Så här såg min sommar ut!

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2007-11-14 01:52

Så här såg min sommar ut!

Skrev en session i brist på annat.

Virgin Mary put my summer astray, found me a way (I miss you)
A fountain in a maze, stroking hips to the sound of the game
My mother would say: sunshine will change these moneyless days
But I hunger for rain, accept the cross to numb my friends' pain
I lost my Tear, never cost me a tear, lost my fear
The fear of loss, got tossed and steered, my cause is clear
Dominance is an obviousness, I stop myself, pause the stress
Cause and effect lost itself to cause and effect
I effect my cause to correct my flaws, accept my chores
Still standing like an errected cock cus less is more
I stare at me, through a mirror: It's barely me
"Stay tight" like Mary's jeans, in a land ferris wheels
The dome where an aries heal, she doesn't care bout me
I'm feeling fine, but I still reminisce to steal a smile
I free my mind by searching between the lines
Faces turn since my birth, just the pace of words
Chased a girl, ended up with amazing birds
Fucking praise the world....
I take my turn, and once again let some paper burn

Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains
Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose
http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2007-11-14 07:27
Gryyyyymt!

I lost my Tear, never cost me a tear, lost my fear
The fear of loss, got tossed and steered, my cause is clear
Dominance is an obviousness, I stop myself, pause the stress
Cause and effect lost itself to cause and effect
I effect my cause to correct my flaws, accept my chores
Still standing like an errected cock cus less is more
- så tungt :)

Big up!
Interista cazzo vuoi, puoi cantarlo quanto vuoi - ma i campioni dell'Italia siamo noooi. JUVENTUS
AMICI DI NESSUNO

2007-11-14 16:33
Fattar inte allting så det kan vara därför jag har så svårt att vetavad jag ska ge dig för kritik. Men du behärskar engelskan jävligt bra och rimmar som en galning. Helt underbart.
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2007-11-14 23:46
hehe, still good.
Vila i frid Pontus holmström 1986-2006! saknad..

2007-11-15 09:32
kul med mk rim

My mother would say: sunshine will change these moneyless days
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tilltalade mig

2007-11-16 13:27
Tack Yam och Kam^^ Och ni andra!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2007-11-16 15:04
Måste hålla med farbror kammel om den här raden:

My mother would say: sunshine will change these moneyless days

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Nice one..

Gillade rimmen och flytet!
Jag är ill, men du är iller... alltså djuret iller

2007-11-16 15:24
Kul se dej droppa oftare :) en av få som verkligen kan skriva.. dope skit ..
and ya already should, and from now on know, capra beats

2007-11-17 18:30
Rimsimvimbim
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2007-11-19 15:34
uuuuuppp
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2007-11-19 17:36
Fett som fan! Många bra rader!
Livets vägar kan föra dig vart som helst...

2007-11-20 18:41
Tack quk!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101
Poet

2007-11-20 18:50
finns inte spec mkt att säga som inte redan sagts
grymt som grisar mannen ;)
Sötnosarna Represent!
"Klart att hiphopen dör ut när alla sitter och hatar"
- Fronda

2007-11-20 18:56
Det var trevligt, pallar inte djupare kritik tyvärr.

2007-11-21 14:08
Tack spadis!

Kul att du kollar iallafall Gaion!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2007-11-21 14:09
Läser bara det som är intressant.

2007-11-26 16:13
uppp
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101