I början av Januari 2014 låstes Whoa och du kan alltså ej logga in eller skriva något nytt i forumen. Innehåll i forum osv kommer finnas tillgängligt. Läs Mer »

   

2007-11-05 23:49

My new face

första texten på engelska, ge gärna kritik och hitta grammatik fel

ahhhhhh...

there went the bell, I'm off from school
another day in hell, were I'm not as cool
as the other kids, they bully me all the time
mostly because I'm fat - I look like a swine
my face is uneven, my nose looks weird
I'm only 10 and I already got a beard
but I got a plan to set everything right
like a ninja I will sneak up in the night
to the worst bully of them all house
... and without making a sound - I'm already in the house
as I crawl through their kitchen and into their living room
I can see the light shining into the window from the moon
and it made me relize, this is now or never
to show these kids that they arent so fucking cleaver
as I enter the bully's room, I take out my pocket knife
and with a slice, slice, slice I got my new face tonight

Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.