Halo bara skrev 1994, the year that Nas dropped his first, Illmatic The shit was nice, but in Rwanda the status were'nt static The U.N.A.M.R was there, but with ten guys down, they fled Left a country torn, with 937000 dead Left em to live in sheds, with the ground as their only beds People were hungry but the things they were fed was machetes and led The sickest part is that during the three months that passed They killed more people faster than were gased during the holocast And i could continue to ramble with a couple examples How about in Turkey were all minoritys are beeing trampled Cuba is another sample, the poor get no conditions to live Nobody want's to give treatment to an HIV-positive kid What about the bombings in Madrid? Another battle lost or won It all depends on what mouth the words come from My thoughts and respect goes out to all the people in heaven My conclution, watch it, were heading for a new 9/11
+ nyheter- grammar and spelling
om jag ska korrigera allt som va fel i den texten kommer det ta mellan 5 och 10 minuter. men nästan alla komman ska ta bort, breath control klarar du av ändå. sen fel ordval lite här och där (were'nt som inte kan skrivas så borde vara wasn't, example istället för sample). sen så rimmar inte passed på holocaust. etc etc etc.
:)keep writin'. kul me lite vettiga bars istället för bara skryt.
samma här. men kan va riktigt kul att göra det nån gång ibland!