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"Regrets" by SpliffSecond

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2006-08-22 21:10

"Regrets" by SpliffSecond

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Regrets


Haha, fick för mej att göra en till liten låt hoppas nån tycker om den iaf :)

*Vart tog duvan vägen?* va bara tvungen att skriva det.. haha


Vers. 1

I couldn't find my self, living in this nightmare
there's a hole that grow to deep and when I sleep
I always cry tears..

There is no justice there's a string loose in this tie
And if the thing was I could die I take my wings and fly up high
survive

With any means, so extreme for the seeing
is it possible to be destroyd, as a humanbeeing
cuz Im feeling,
kind of disturbed lost in the moment
hope that words beein pronounce the right way, on my opponions

Cuz all my life I've been like constantly in battles
there's no sense in this called common sense it's nonesense
with this rap shit

So I come back with like an army full of men
try to disarm me now my friend I harm you easily again the end

Is when, people don't know what is wrong and right
and where the strong survive the night
where all the weak will die and seek the light

For we who speak or write leagalize the green allright
Need the weed to feed my self and anyone who is around

So feed yourself some brown crown yourself to be the king
Sit there on the couge and see the world pass by not do a thing


Ref. 2x

So let the sun rise,
and the moon fall,
remember one time,
when we was so small,
We used to show all,
and laugh at em,
now it's like half the world clap their hands at us


Vers. 2

Not in position of power,
desitions beein made after the gist of this big litt-le flower,
Give it an hour, or two seconds
see if my toung will expose a new wepond

It's time to get on my mind is on probation
I find this whole nation as the source of my war insperation

I get you towards the station, just fall back in your coma and
you know I be the guid to your sences
leave you defenceless
Im proud of ya
Who said Im allowed to fulfill it out loud and
come to you laughin say what just happend you is just a pussie
or show me you can rap man
Straight to the trash can ash light and fire
You probebly get your money when you get retired
Here you got fired why the blood splatter?
Pigeon your a fagget and that's all that really mathers



Ref. 2x

So let the sun rise,
and the moon fall,
remember one time,
when we was so small,
We used to show all,
and laugh at em,
now it's like half the world clap their hands at us


Vers. 3

People wanna see me but they can't
because Im locked up with my plant
I won't come out unless agreed demands,
If you can read it stands; stand up high and listen
Say what people need to hear dont give a fuck 'bout politicions
So, give me a question and I answare you polite
But if you try to fuck me up I pull your pants down and I bite,
Who cares Im white when all my lines get out of line
Reminds my self of who I am and who I am I can not fight

If that's not right then who are you be there to judge?
Will you be there to judge? then you will see what's up yo,

Beacause I won't go to places where I use to be
You might aswell allready getting used to me,

Cuz what is truth to me I spit up in your face it's an disgrace
that you can't see that you gave up without a chase, pigeon
your not a legend your a pussy your a lame bitch man
Come suck my dick cuz it's no difference it's the same shit man

And then there where Silence.... haha

2006-08-22 21:15
jävlar vad du måste ha dyslexi eller svårt för det engelska språket... jävlar asså

2006-08-22 21:16
haha
And then there where Silence.... haha

2006-08-22 22:08
nice beat!...
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2006-08-23 18:13
jo det är ju det... hatade du texten? ;)
And then there where Silence.... haha

2006-08-23 21:55
orka inte lyssna låten nu men,

texten va rätt mycket stavfel...
och grammatik fel, men ja fatta va du ville ha sagt i varje rad så texten dög:)

2006-08-24 17:26
tack så mkt jimsey.. gjorde den på 2 timmar ;) haha
And then there where Silence.... haha

2006-08-24 17:51
Nope jag hatade inte texten! :P

I couldn't find my self, living in this nightmare
there's a hole that grow to deep and when I sleep
I always cry tears..
En skön inledning och bra berättande rader

There is no justice there's a string loose in this tie
And if the thing was I could die I take my wings and fly up high
survive
Dom här raderna kändes däremot knas... rad 1 bra rad 2 konstigt upplagd

With any means, so extreme for the seeing
is it possible to be destroyd, as a humanbeeing
cuz Im feeling,
kind of disturbed lost in the moment
hope that words beein pronounce the right way, on my opponions
Soft rimschema och överlag bra!

Cuz all my life I've been like constantly in battles
there's no sense in this called common sense it's nonesense
with this rap shit
hmm... tror du skulle kunnat vridit till dom här lite mer för fulländad effekt :P men taken var god och visst funkar raderna

So I come back with like an army full of men
try to disarm me now my friend I harm you easily again the end
nja... här vart det lite lamt mannen... ensam är starkast :P

Is when, people don't know what is wrong and right
and where the strong survive the night
where all the weak will die and seek the light
Såg nu att raderna innan flöt ihop bra med dom här där rimmen flyter fint & återigen ett bra rimschema!

For we who speak or write leagalize the green allright
Need the weed to feed my self and anyone who is around
här känns det knas men nåt får mig att gilla dom... kanske för att man e en pothead :P

So feed yourself some brown crown yourself to be the king
Sit there on the couge and see the world pass by not do a thing
här tyckte jag det sket sig lite... gillade inte upplägget eller rimmen... tyvärr.


Får ta resten en annan gång... sitter på jobbet & hinner inte mer nu...
peace

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2006-08-24 22:11
hehe tack så mkt mortalis håller med dej i det mästa du säger faktiskt.. hinner inte skriva så mkt mer nu ska jobba imorgon och katten leker med gittarren ;)
And then there where Silence.... haha

2006-08-26 01:57
*gun shot*
And then there where Silence.... haha