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Fuck "Fuck You."

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2006-02-24 13:18

Fuck "Fuck You."



An old man with white eyes once asked me
If I could read between the lines through his glasses
Combine all of his signs and bind listeners to my eyes
Saw the pattern, sparked off whats what happening then
From every bird flapping its wings to Pac rapping his will
He explained everyhing, seperating knowledge and college
Tying Then and Now together and entwined Future with Forever
He stopped speaking in tounges and said:
Will you ever rid them of their doubts?
I said:
I stepped down, I did not step out.


I change the world,
Fight the fight, demise and rise, mind by mind
I write my rhymes, eye to eye, line by line
Youre not brave if you follow youre dreams
Youre just stupid if you dont take that leap
But be not weary of those quick to fall
Cos chains vaporize when hitting souls thick as blood
You can keep your empire of dirt and sand castles
Cos a tide is hitting the beach of rap battles
And I just surf the wave, put words to page
The world will face an era with an urge to change
Great whites trade their Purpose for Purchase
So many fishes are lost beneath the surface
And we're on the sideline asking "where's Nemos dad?"
Soon enough even our feelings clash and we scream and bash
Every dream and plan, there are no different stories
Every soul is tied together in a great imprinted orgie
You have to find yourself between the lines
Now I'm asking you, can you read the signs?

Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains
Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose
http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-02-24 13:23
Yeah, fett bra. Vet inte riktigt om jag förstod allt men det kanske var det som var meningen? Ialafall, snygga rim, skönt flow; jag håller vid att du är den främsta inom engelska rap på den här lilla sidan.
"Yeah, I'll be there in 5 minutes."
5 hour's later, I'll be there in 5 minutes.

2006-02-24 13:57
"Youre not brave if you follow youre dreams
Youre just stupid if you dont take that leap"

-Tungt som sagt. "You´re" had evart snyggare, men men...

Intressant!
Hälsningar från Finland:
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2006-02-24 19:35
Tack Creeew, palla de där små pluttarna :/

Tack Munter!^

Tack Oskar!

Tack men nej Yum
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-02-24 21:01
Fick lite Aesop-vibbar.

Tungt. Riktigt skön känsla över hela texten.
 

2006-02-25 12:01
Tack Bross!


Uppskattar om alla som skriver i tråden drar ut några favoritrader osv ^^
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-02-25 17:12
Schysst. Första raderna är riktigt bra.
 

2006-02-25 20:16
Gillade inledningen grymt mycket :) bra jobbat Hwarang!

2006-02-26 12:24
gillade den hackiga början;
Fight the fight, demise and rise, mind by mind
I write my rhymes, eye to eye, line by line

fett bra inledning enligt mig, texten flöt fint som fan. props!
Denna användare har skrivit alla inlägg där användaren har tagits bort från whoa.

2006-02-27 21:57
Tack Antlon och Terapi


Tack så mycket 2fan!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-02-27 22:08
fy fan asså... så underbart mannen... detta e det bästa jag läst på länge...

och uppnings raden:

Fight the fight, demise and rise, mind by mind
I write my rhymes, eye to eye, line by line

sååå under bar... shit asså... visste att du var bra men detta tar priset... det bästa du laggt ( som jag sett )

du får mitt högsta betyg nånsin....9 cribs av 10 möjliga ( har som bäst gett ut en 8:a förut... )

Peace
GÖR OM, GÖR RÄTT.
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jag är dyslektisk och droppar hårdare rader än dej... SKÄMS!!!!

2006-03-01 16:26
Tack Cribios! Väldigt glad om du kastar in en riktig crib också ;D Fuck it, I'll settle with ribs too...!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-03-01 20:09
mycket bra, mycket läsvärt och framförallt mycket som man inte tänkt på tidigare som man kanske borde fundera lite mer på.
jag har läst den tre gånger nu och hittar fortfarande olika vinklar på det hela, men dom här raderna fastnade jag av nån anledning mest för:

He explained everyhing, seperating knowledge and college
Tying Then and Now together and entwined Future with Forever
He stopped speaking in tounges and said:
Will you ever rid them of their doubts?
I said:
I stepped down, I did not step out.

I change the world,
Fight the fight, demise and rise, mind by mind
I write my rhymes, eye to eye, line by line
Youre not brave if you follow youre dreams
Youre just stupid if you dont take that leap
But be not weary of those quick to fall
Cos chains vaporize when hitting souls thick as blood


skönt att se lite hwarang och skönt att se hög standard här.
Close your eyes, Just feel and realize, it is real and not a dream, I'm in you and you're in me.

2006-03-04 14:05
Tack Saara, nice kritik^^


Kommer nog droppa ltie mer nu när jag har sagt upp mig från jobbet.
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-03-05 13:28
upp!
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-05-09 02:25
up
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-05-16 22:50
Du är fortfarande stört duktig.
Living is easy, with eyes closed.

2006-05-17 17:43
Tack Breaky. Kul med lite favoritrader!


Tack Pluffen, jag vet det är fett störande! ;D
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101

2006-05-31 11:40
Ärligt! tväärsoft text Hwarang =)

You can keep your empire of dirt and sand castles
Cos a tide is hitting the beach of rap battles
And I just surf the wave, put words to page
The world will face an era with an urge to change

tycker ja lät skönast =)

2006-06-01 01:49
Tacklapp! :)
Me? What? naw, I'm the kid closing curtains<br> Perfect? No, I'm a brew slamming guy with a purpose<br>http://www.thewrestlinggame.com/wg.asp?w=110101