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Först texten, mycket kritik tack

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2006-01-26 10:29

Först texten, mycket kritik tack

Min första text någonsin, så ge mig mycket bra kritik. Säg inte bara att den suger ge mig en orsak så jag kan jobba på det. :D


Remember when i was 5, everything was so easy//
No teachers talking shit and no one trying to beat me//
All i wanted from this world was love and money//
Got a parkinghouse for my toys and it was so funny//
I was just playing with that parkinghouse and my mom said “What’s wrong with the other toys hunny”//
I remember when i started playing hockey, damn that shit was fun//
I wonder why i quited i could have become someone//
Got into my first fist fight when i was about ten//
I went home with tears in my eyes everyday back then//
When i was 12 years old i started boxing//
I couldn’t stand getting my ass kicked everyday//
I was still getting beat down but i was getting stronger//
First time i knocked someone out was one of them bullys//
I remember i knocked the shit out of that guy with a rock//
The motherucker got angry and started regain strength//
Got his friend but i gained confidence and knew i could do it again//
Picked up a new rock hit em both over the head//
I was so angry so i started stomp them to the stomach//
By the time i quited i’ve kicked one of them unconscious//
I ran home and called the ambulance ran up to my room crying//
The kid survieved but suffered head injurice(?)//
Now i am 16 and all the shit have stopped//
I am more the guy that bully now and i smokes the pot//
This was my life and it was a battle of will//
I had to survive even tho i was going through hell//
I say like pac said “ Only god can judge me”//


You keep believing, I'll keep evolving