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Behind bars!

Vår Hiphop - Lyricism

   

2005-04-25 01:16

Behind bars!

Skrivade lite på engelska språket. har ej gjort det tidigare. kan några droppa lite elak/snäll/konstruktiv kritik?

Text: Johan Hedlund.



Why are you looking at me that way?
don't you know I'm not here to play?
i'm never gonna be your gay -
is that okay?
Whatever happens tonight it's gonna be my funeral toworrow
and I really hope that you don't feel any sorrow
You could come and visit me somtimes if you feel like it
I'll be down in the valley of darkness - alone, you dipshit
I don't know how everything could go so wrong in my life
killed my motherfucking wife with a 12 inch knife
The cops came to my house and arrested me yesterday
i pledged not guilty - but they said "no way".

Reffen:
so here I am in a cold and empty cell
"my empty cell"
just waiting for the moment I go to hell
"go to hell"
but before I die I have something to say
"something to say"
You know you always stood in my way
"stood in my way"

I don't know why everything went so wrong
but If it hadn't I wouldn't written this song
when I'm depressed and everything feels like shit
I'm dreaming of making my first hit
maybe these lyrics can find a nice beat
and then I don't have to sit down in the electric-seat
cause I did get the chair - didn't I mention that?
that's the truth - you big fat cat!
my cellmate is a fucking freak by the way
he does his cocaine and really got nothing to say
he looks at me like I'm some kind of nutcase
- well guess I am, cause I sat down on his face
So I'm gonna stab him to death tonight
might aswell do it now so I don't get in a fight
I'm already a murderer so what do I care?
I'm ready to kill another shithole, promise you I dare

so here I am in a cold and empty cell
"in my empty cell"
just waiting for the moment I go to hell
"I go to hell"
but before I die I have something to tell
"I've got something to tell"
You know you always stood in my way
"stood in my way"

Bad guys always die!!

2005-04-25 10:53
Mä...
upp!
Bad guys always die!!

2005-04-25 16:22
Nån måste väl tycka nåt?
Bad guys always die!!

2005-06-01 16:51
Du är inte konkret i texten. Håll dig till en sorts budskap, en sorts stil och en sorts berättelse. Du blandar en historia med lite självrannsakan och det framgår inte speciellt tydligt vem du är, vem du skriver för etc. Ojämnt med andra ord. I övrigt var det inget spektakulärt på rim- eller innehållssidan.

//Peace