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[Ny Tråd] Objektiv vs Sederos 10 bars

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2010-10-16 12:18

[Ny Tråd] Objektiv vs Sederos 10 bars

Objektiv

I'll make this MC wish he never battled when he got the brain of a fish,
Its dinnertime in the US, a winner rhyme cookin' a swe-dish!

This bitch is disgusting! Crooks and bastards; look at this shit-eating drag;
His skills is rusting plus his swag on some suicidal emo style mixed with a fag.

Is this kid hooked with THE GAME like the Lakers? Cuz he's constantly losing,
This dendrophiliac fuck up the papers, i feel guilt for the trees he's abusing.

Retarded fucks could punch keys on random; ''askjdglcnvaegkbk'' and Sed loses at once, (then he cries to both of his moms)
Wishing him good luck is like eating lunch and give fake lottery tickets to homeless bums.

Votes for Sederos cant be found, his rawness is below shitstain particles,
He's writing ''Looking for Fame!'' in newspapers on the missing peoples articles.

Sederos have sex with dumb bitches, i dont care bout stupid as fucks,
He's lucky enough, he would'nt loose his virginity if it was'nt was bucks.

Got told that he's abusing his girl, i started to laugh bout their bitching,
cuz I talked to the slut and she told me his punches is'nt hard hitting.

I dont understand Sederos but i figured his acronym as this bitch as is nuts;
Its: Stupid Expert on Drinkin Alcohol while Riding Obese Sluts.
Even trashcans got better content than you.. Not to mention dead bugs,
He would'nt gain interest even if he recycled bars to cash in some clubs.

I'll eat your dead rhymes from the crypt they spawn from .. Call me Pharaohe Munch,
I just joined the battle to destroy a shitkid and get better .. At a sucker punch.





Sederos


Ur no competition what you spit is only fiction u beatin me is a impossiable mission
U cant stop me by any means your style is unattractive like a bitch with baggy jeans

Every line I spit I improve but every line u spit ur closer to lose
Im not here to amuse I make you look obnoxious and cheap like a chinese massuse

I inspire people like Malcom Ex I deliver my shit right to your door steps like Fed Ex
Cats like u are addicted to my text like sex I smoke u like I smoke a bag of sets

I got punks like u afraid I get more props than a sicillian getting made
U winning this battle is just as possiable as a transvestite getting laid

So do yourself a favour throw away the pen and the paper
Cause Im burying you like a Undertaker

Im shakin you like I shake my willie Why spit 10 bars about a chump it's silly
You feel me? I make everyone forget about u like hip hop forgot about philly

enough with the metaphores cause soon I will hear you screamin 'no more'
I make your ears sore cause what i spit is hardcore but what the fuck for?

This is a waste of time I would much rather smoke a bag of dime
Why? Cause everytime u brag in your rhymes we all know its a lie

It's tough times I leave no one to spare what the fuck is a norwegian doing here?
If u leave no one would even care 9 bars and I leave your sorry ass in despair


votes up muthafuckas!


Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth

2010-10-16 21:07
Ni vet inte vad bars betyder va?
"Jag var också rap när jag var fjorton år man."

2010-10-16 21:12
jo det gör vi och istället för att klaga kan du vota
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth

2010-10-16 21:21
App: Sederos sendte meg en melding og sa at 10 bars betyr 20 linjer, at det er slik det er på denne siden. Altså, 1 bar = 2 linjer. Jeg mente også på at 1 bar = en linje.

Men det er forskjellig fra side til side så jeg trodde at jeg hadde gjort en feil og skrev 10 linjer til. Har også vært bortpå en side der 1 bar = 2 linjer når det er audio og 1 bar = 1 linje når det er tekst.

Uansett. det er visst 20 vs 20 nå. Vote hvis du har mulighet. Jeg gir en vote eller feedback tilbake hvis du gir en link under voten din. Når det er så mange linjer ser jeg heller ikke behovet for å dele opp voten sålenge du beskriver voten. Do your thing!

2010-10-16 21:24
Det är inte 20 vs 20 rader heller om ni räknar.


Jag ska läsa igenom och ge er en röst.
"Jag var också rap när jag var fjorton år man."

2010-10-16 21:38
Got told that he's abusing his girl, i started to laugh bout their bitching,
cuz I talked to the slut and she told me his punches is'nt hard hitting.



Var den bästa, och typ enda någorlunda bra raden, dåligt rim dock.

Objektiv vinner på att han lyckades få in en bra rad.
"Jag var också rap när jag var fjorton år man."

2010-10-17 12:52
objektiv
I'll make this MC wish he never battled when he got the brain of a fish,
Its dinnertime in the US, a winner rhyme cookin' a swe-dish!

-svaga rhymes som förstör raden. Sattsa på attantingen sätte ihop ord o få multies eller ord med flera vokaler.

This bitch is disgusting! Crooks and bastards; look at this shit-eating drag;
His skills is rusting plus his swag on some suicidal emo style mixed with a fag.

-samma sak här svaga rhyme. Gillar dock att du connecta den med första bar'en, du skapar en historia då kinda. Iomed de samman kopplar du alla dom grejjerna till den först, allt runt omkring de osv, de är ett stort plus om de görs bra. Man följer lättare och de blir mer målande.

This dendrophiliac fuck up the papers, i feel guilt for the trees he's abusing.
-denna kunde blivit skit bra, tycker inte du fick till den men att de fanns värde i den +0,5

both of his moms
-känns ganska played out

Wishing him good luck is like eating lunch and give fake lottery tickets to homeless bums.
-tycker inte eating lunch makear sence riktigt men +0,5 iallafall. Fanns värde.

Votes for Sederos cant be found, his rawness is below shitstain particles,
He's writing ''Looking for Fame!'' in newspapers on the missing peoples articles.

-den va bra! 0,5 för första o 1 för andra raden = +1,5

Sederos have sex with dumb bitches, i dont care bout stupid as fucks,
He's lucky enough, he would'nt loose his virginity if it was'nt was bucks

-känns som denna blir ganska rörig, eller så är de bara mina engelska kunskaper som brister :D

Got told that he's abusing his girl, i started to laugh bout their bitching,
cuz I talked to the slut and she told me his punches is'nt hard hitting

-känns jäkligt weak men kunde blivit fet, hade behövs mer filande.

Its: Stupid Expert on Drinkin Alcohol while Riding Obese Sluts.
Even trashcans got better content than you.. Not to mention dead bugs,
He would'nt gain interest even if he recycled bars to cash in some clubs.

-hans acronym +0,5 för ide rikhet. trashcan nice nice men dödar den tyvär med bugs så blir bara +0,5. recycled kunde blivit fet också tyvär losar du den, skulle hållt dig till hela sopor temat rakt igenom.

Sista raden känns också ganska weak.

flow: 6/10
total: 0,5+0,5+1,5+0,5+0,5= +3,5

Sederos

impossible mission/ baggy jeans
impossible mission, har inte du använt den nyligen? nån använda den i din förra battle åtminstonde. Och baggy jeans brudan kan visst va heta :P

Every line I spit I improve but every line u spit ur closer to lose
Im not here to amuse I make you look obnoxious and cheap like a chinese massuse

-funkar o flyter bra, chinese massuse som e cheap? dunno bout that, kanske kunde filat mer på slutet.

I inspire people like Malcom Ex I deliver my shit right to your door steps like Fed Ex
-de e nice +1

I got punks like u afraid I get more props than a sicillian getting made
-slutet fett, början (afraid) förstör tyvär, +0,5

So do yourself a favour throw away the pen and the paper
Cause Im burying you like a Undertaker

-weak o ihålig men fyndig +0,5

silly/philly
-låter som ett B bazookajoe rhyme :/

enough with the metaphores cause soon I will hear you screamin 'no more'
I make your ears sore cause what i spit is hardcore but what the fuck for?

-första raden där, skulle tagit bort soon, will, skulle gjort raden mycke tyngre om du gjorde de, i presens alltså. Easy rhyming men går hem +0,5

dime lie - weak

Sista raden weak också "what the fuck" riktig fillout känns de som.

flow: 8/10
total: 1+0,5+0,5+0,5= +2,5



Summary
I flow flyter sederos bättre men text messigt hard objektiv mer innehåll och slagkraftighet. Min röst går endå till sederos då jag vet att... har sett iallafall att objektiv kan mycket bättre.

vote: sederos
En bit av allt och inget

2010-10-17 13:42
tack för votsen 1-1
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth

2010-10-18 22:04
v; sederos.
Yo' Mommas so fat, they had to change ''one size fits all'' to
''one size fits most''

2010-10-19 11:08
2-1 tack!
Whetever taken seriously or takin pride, Bronx MCs leave suckers whistling cold wind madness through loose teeth