LuffarN - Keep on through

LuffarN - Keep on through

Så jag bestämde mig för att försöka rappa på engelska, vet att uttal inte är så bra, texten är väl säket helt fuckad den men gjorde mitt bästa. Ge mig konstruktiv kritik nu whoa ;D

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Text :

ref: 2ggr
if you fall in life, you better keep on through/
if you seeking love, than you will find it to/
let your heart deside, and you will see/
you ganna make it, you just got to belive/

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allright listen now, to my life in despair/
got some problems in my life but "hey" who fucking cares/
life is tuff - yeah i heard it all before/
ganna fight to the end man, thats for sure/

and every time i tried, you just pushed me down/
and im speaking from my heart, you really let me down/
all my friends stodd up, you was never there for me/
when our love thorn apart, it was never meant to be/

got to focus on good side, never look back/
but it's hard to move on whit the memories we had/
im gonna find love, ganna find it someday,/
i wanna be something big and i will make it some way/

i hear my call, hear them all screeming my name/
whit a full crowd of people, and whit me on the stage/
yeah ah - it's my destiny/
and it's gonna happen, you just have to belive/

kom igen nu whoa ! mycket kommentarer :)