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The great escape - fortnight
I'm on my way
I got my guitar
crowded place on a cloudy day
gentle breeze in the air
homeless everywhere
try to catch the train
and escape the rain
chorus(2x)
I'm on my way
to a fortnight's holiday
I'm on my way
leaving you today
the train moves
at the speed of light
there's no turning back
the time goes by
raindrops keep falling from the sky
a quiet crowd, some already sleeping
I hold my head high and keep dreaming
chorus(2x)
I'm on my way
to a fortnight's holiday
I'm on my way
leaving you today
the sound of the brakes
whine through my ears
a big rush reaches my eyes
for a moment I lost the control
now I'm finally here
I step out and see a crowded place...
a crowded place...
The great escape - years of tears
I come home late
see my mom sitting in the kitchen
take a slow move and grab a plate
her eyes full of tears
the pain lasts for years
she declines my help
but I know it hurts
chorus(2x)
she gave birth to me
now she don't even look at me
I know it's easy to regret
but will she ever forget
a pray or a sorry won't do it
you are too deep for that
how could I let you down
in my life, you are the crown
you always were there
unconditional love
many things run through my head
for a moment I wish I were dead
chorus(2x)
she gave birth to me
now she don't even look at me
I know it's easy to regret
but will she ever forget
a moment of great silence
the kitchen filled with heavy air
what I did is everything but fair
her face so pale
make me wonder what I've done
I raise but the body feels like a ton...
The great escape - via dolorosa
lead a life of misery
hear hollow promises
happiness becomes fragile
which way to go
speak your mind in vain
treat your ideas with disdain
chorus(2x)
what do you do
when one of the joys of life
is not your smile
get rid of painful memories
stop listen to the prophecies
try to forget the past
don't live your life too fast
there gotta be a turning point
chorus(2x)
what do you do
when one of the joys of life
is not your smile
time heals all sorrows
I doubt it
there's no remedy for pain
nor for a betrayal of trust
I beg you to hold on
there gotta be a turning point...
The great escape - heavenly stars
the sky full of stars
a lovely sight
supposed to be a perfect night
but something is not feeling right
chills run down my spine
I'm not feeling that fine
that's why I...
chorus
glimpse at these stars
a wonderful moment of no scars
that fills me with
peace in mind and soul
life is a gift
so is freedom
feel great looking at the stars
thinking of people behind bars
you never know
when you may pass away
live your life today
that's why I...
chorus
glimpse at these stars
a wonderful moment of no scars
that fills me with
peace in mind and soul
the stars mitigating the great misery
happy thoughts cross my mind
wish this moment were eternal
but nothing lasts forever
it's a harsh reality...
Jag bara måste:
jag kicka henne
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