nytt försök(vad tycker ni om mina låtar?)
det verkar som forumet "lyricism" enbart är för hiphop och jag hade inte tänkt mig en hiphop"karriär", så skulle jag vara tacksam om ni gav lite respons på mina nyskrivna låtar: ska jag bara lägga ner mitt nyväckta musikaliska intresse eller "du är faktiskt inte så pjåkig". här kommer iaf tre låtar jag skrivit(har valt att kalla mig The great escape ). The great escape - life goes on, so does she I sit and reminisce how can I not you gave me so much your ups with my downs make me believe when they say opposites attracts and that's the basis Chorus(2x): you cure the pain in my life you are the core of my happiness let me see you smile let me feel no bitterness life goes on, so does you no reason to feel empitness now I move too, boo, even though my journey is filled with bitterness they say love is painful how can I relate in my hand your hand fits perfectly make me think you my soulmate Chorus(2x) being around you is a pure pleasure being with you make me think I'm floating in the space see half my soul take a small pace, what a big distaste how can I ever forget certain metaphysical bond is hard to get even harder to interpret still I hope you come back and get me back on track cus' life lika a ghost is not a life... The great escape - a peaceful place imagine a place free of sorrow free of cold winds blowing no one telling you what's right a place where the night is short and the day is bright please take me away please lead me on the right way chorus(2x) human race has lost their face I need a queit and peaceful place cus' human race has lost their face help me, lead me, on the right trace a place free of blood stains a place where no one complains in the Utopia people do care run away from the burning sky dare cross the fire the time is right see my shadow pass by chorus(2x) look behind see the flames look straight see the hopes, the horizon, my feet hurting but feel no pain no regrets never turn back, seen a lot of cries tired of ties heard too many lies... The great escape - betrayed my old man used to say I'm a fool now I finally realize all the trust was in vain the payback hits you with a great pain they tell you they care but why don't they share in a world where the winner takes it all I refuse to be another brick in the wall chorus(2x): I've been betrayed how can I ever believe look into my eyes don't tell me any more lies some people pray when they feeling down I wonder will they ever understand some are fed up being misled tired of measuring souls in cred as long there is a greed some will always be in truly need chorus(2x): what makes you happy what makes you feel crappy my goal in life is not wealth I choose truth and good health I just wanna be able to believe please make them stop deceive...
Jag bara måste: jag kicka henne
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